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House Rules but due tonight

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360:


Your lines punch while mine murder guys and make 'em my lunch
so I can bake or fry Yung, but either way this guys done
Decent Opener...7/10

I'll leave your toungue tied in a knot, then rip it out and pin it on the side of a box
with your head inside, then send it overnight to your mom
Na..Box/Mom doesn't Rhyme Kid.. 4/10

I spit with experience and hit this kid where his spirit is
with spears dipped in venom that'll end 'em like a period
Ok....7/10

I'm the master with a white beard counterattackin' what you write here
before I see it cause this human being passes you by light years
OK Wordplay but No punch....6/10

I'll rip you like a wet tissue and chew you up then spit you
on the walls, you'll look like a spit ball when it's through
Ok Attempt but no sting.....6/10



30/50



YUNGDOSIA:



Nigga Im Bomb So, Ill Murder U Fast While We Get It On Slow...
And Leave 360 In A Box Like A New Game Console..!!
Nice Opener....9/10

This Dudes Got No Hits, He Cant Free Or Spit See...
Pathetic...Nigga Cant Get His Record Spins, With The Name 360..!!
Ok....7/10

U A Bitch See, Couldnt Be Me Or Rap Close Hope This Punk Will Learn...
That He Aint Special...Anyone Can Do 360, Just Jump And Turn..!!
Na......4/10

Nuff With The Nameplay Talk..This Fagget Loves A Gang Of Cock...
He Got Trained By The Whole Hood, Just Say He Bangs On The Block..!!
ok....6/10

And Look I Can Tell He An Alcholic, Comin Home With Nine Bags...
But He Got Smashed With A Six Pack Last Time...Way He Got Knocked Out By Abs..!!
Na....Weak Closer 5/10




31/50





Overall i Feel Yung Just Edged this one by 1 point he just had better punches and his nameplay was up there.






V/YungDosia

360

Your lines punch while mine murder guys and make 'em my lunch
so I can bake or fry Yung, but either way this guys done
hmm. Eh.. ok i suppose

I'll leave your toungue tied in a knot, then rip it out and pin it on the side of a box
with your head inside, then send it overnight to your mom
.....No

I spit with experience and hit this kid where his spirit is
with spears dipped in venom that'll end 'em like a period
Hmm....no

I'm the master with a white beard counterattackin' what you write here
before I see it cause this human being passes you by light years
Lol

I'll rip you like a wet tissue and chew you up then spit you
on the walls, you'll look like a spit ball when it's through
Not really.






YUNGDOSIA


Nigga Im Bomb So, Ill Murder U Fast While We Get It On Slow...
And Leave 360 In A Box Like A New Game Console..!!
Lol okay.

This Dudes Got No Hits, He Cant Free Or Spit See...
Pathetic...Nigga Cant Get His Record Spins, With The Name 360..!!
Lol k

U A Bitch See, Couldnt Be Me Or Rap Close Hope This Punk Will Learn...
That He Aint Special...Anyone Can Do 360, Just Jump And Turn..!!
Hmm.. eh. But ok.

Nuff With The Nameplay Talk..This Fagget Loves A Gang Of Cock...
He Got Trained By The Whole Hood, Just Say He Bangs On The Block..!!
Hmm. Ok.

And Look I Can Tell He An Alcholic, Comin Home With Nine Bags...
But He Got Smashed With A Six Pack Last Time...Way He Got Knocked Out By Abs..!!
No.....


Well... i think it was kinda one sided... Dosia seems to know what his doing a little more... But not to say 360 didn't come hard.

My Vote/Dosia.






Edited.. Had ish still there from when i copied both rhymes.

Thanks For The Votes

2-0 Uppn