Hip Hop Forum

12 lines
(suppose to be an hour battle, due at midnight)
uh, no biting and things like that

Check...Im a start keying now

lol, not a big fan of checks, but fine

go, lol

lol...my bad, u can start keyn now too ormake um due n an hour from now.

I assault your type with a falcon knife, one slice will solve this fight
I've watched the evolution of rhymes and yours aren't evolving right
Yung getting Spun like the college-life, you're looking to frail for ten lines
your pen lies, the Olson Twins have ten times, the enzymes
and fine, I'll admit I liked some of them rhymes, in the evolution battle
them are the same punchlines, I use to tackle from stupid assholes
stop yourself from future wack flows, our audience is holding prayers
they know your scared because I'm murdering yung like polar bears
I'm kidding, NO ONE cares! I'm the man around here and the top poster
this kids a faggot, the only one who rolls with doe is a pot smoker
I'll drop dosia, ur a hip hop poser, the cunning type, sounding dumb on mics
this has become ur life, joined a hundred sites, not one MC said yung is nice

-- Mon Dec 28, 2009 7:19 pm --

ooops didnt see u already dropped..

lets get sum votes

Metas: Plex
Punches: Yung (had one for every line)
Flow: Plex (Yung was a slight bit choppy on the read, but hell so am I)
Complexity: Plex (obvious... his multies were crazy for a quick key)
Most enjoyable: Yung
Name Play: Yung (plexi, comp, "C")

Catagory wise, you guys come out even so I will vote off of the most enjoyable. The one who would've gotten all the ooooo's and ahhhhhs in a live battle....

...Vote = Young
Dude's making his presence felt, I'll tell you that much.

Excellent battle guys.

1-0 Thanks for voting appreciate it.

-- Wed Dec 30, 2009 8:00 pm --

people who vote leave a link to the battle u need votes on

My first lines are all set ups...

thanks for the vote tho!

2-0

i will check out those drops soon aswell.

See me i get things poppin...lifes movin fast ud see blurry motion...

Ill you give the fact there were more set-ups than I orginally thought, but not ALL Dosia..and its not a completely bad thing. Everybody does it I think. It the thing that seperates vets from up and comers. I do the same thing with alot of my first lines..

Understand what ur saying...but ur wrong "Get things poppin" and lifes movin fast, as in im doin big shit was my first line right....my second was "C's pretty big"....understand? ive been doin this for a bit, dont trip.

Nameplay: Yung
Wordplay: Yung
Personals: Complexity
Punches: Tie
Entertainment: Yung
Multis: Plex

Plex's verse was alright, but you could tell that he didn't put much time into it. Yung's verse was nice, though some of his nameplay was played, it was still dope.

Overall: Yung