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5 bars/10lines
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first to 5 (3-0 = k.o)

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i'll give yung dos a shot of medicine like pediatric care,
ya bars like exaggerated couples, they come in pre-dramatic pairs,

i've trained to beat u to confetti, so i practiced rippin paper,
u need a baby DOSe,cuz ur mother was on crack when givin labor,

don't expect to get far i got a knack for spittin greater,
u couldn't 'blow' me out the match if u had iraq's decision makers,

battlin yung.. that's like child abuse plus adolescent rape,
cuz i might 'cum up short' if i end up half a second 'late'

this isn't even a challenge, at best.. these rhymes are random,
there's no room for yung, and each spit u 'fit'..is just a line of tantrum

-- Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:38 pm --

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Evo

i'll give yung dos a shot of medicine like pediatric care,
ya bars like exaggerated couples, they come in pre-dramatic pairs,

I wasnt really feeling that opener. 3/10

i've trained to beat u to confetti, so i practiced rippin paper,
u need a baby DOSe,cuz ur mother was on crack when givin labor,

Mom on crack has been done to death. 4/10

don't expect to get far i got a knack for spittin greater,
u couldn't 'blow' me out the match if u had iraq's decision makers,

Nice. I like this bar. I love the word play here 8/10

battlin yung.. that's like child abuse plus adolescent rape,
cuz i might 'cum up short' if i end up half a second 'late'

^^ made me chuckle 8/10

this isn't even a challenge, at best.. these rhymes are random,
there's no room for yung, and each spit u 'fit'..is just a line of tantrum

You ended it much better then you opened it. 6/10

But for someone with really good talent.
You just didnt come hard at all.
29/50*

Yung

Im a run all over this bitch..And he damn sure knew it...
Cuz its Easy To Go Through Evolution..Specially if a caveman can do it..!!

FIRE!! hahaha lol. Nice 10/10

Now Judging by ya skill u wont be famous..or have lots of loot...
Cuz no one wants Entertainment from E..Unless they watch the soup..!!

Not so much...A good attempt but it is lacking.
6/10

Ive heard him spit his whack shit.. Really what the fuck fag!!?...
Bitch you should never drop anything...untill ur nuts have..!!!

Played idea, But you fashioned it well 7/10

Emcees I roast for fun..if u boast ur done...
And thanks to Dateline NBC..Its clear now that you cant come close to young..!!

^^I like the reference, feeling it. 6/10

Honestly Evolution dont bring heat...Ill leave him rocked well..
Cuz he dont Deliver Fire... He just uses HotMail..!!!

^^This closer was the worst of your barz.
4/10

33/50


Vote = Yung. Even more so for being a rookie here. He did great against a "vet"

Thanks for the vote...thought people woulda felt the second bar lol. upppin nice battle evolution

29/50 btw lol, not like 2 makes a difference, just noticed the math was wrong

but yea good battle yung, definitely need a rematch sometime,


uppin for some votes in this

rofl. ya it is. that's cause I upped your 4th bar 2 points after I read the battle again. but didnt update the total score heh.

thanks 4 votin

punches - Yung
personals - Yung
flow - Evo took multis but yung took delivery..so tie
wordplay - Yung
opener/closer - Yung

..it was obvious evolution half ass this, i seen this guy rip guys apart lyrically idk wtf he was tryin here.
one example is


i'll give yung dos a shot of medicine like pediatric care,
ya bars like exaggerated couples, they come in pre-dramatic pairs

^^its clever in a way but not hard hitting at all, of course the rhyming is not a problem but still, the delivery was not there.

but anyways Yungdosia did a great job with attacking his opponent here.

Im a run all over this bitch..And he damn sure knew it...
Cuz its Easy To Go Through Evolution..Specially if a caveman can do it..!!


^^ that wasd my fave because its not only a nameplay but its a reference to something I know about which is the Geiko insurance haha

so Yung gets my vote

Thanks Fam

2-0 Uppin

punches - Dosia
personals - eh Evo tried but failed so Dosia
flow - i'd have to agree with Arv tied
wordplay - Dosia
opener/closer - Dosia hands down... Evo tried but again failed i see where he was tryin to set it up it just didn't really work out haha

good battle both of you but i give my vote to Yung Dosia

3-0 KO

thanks 4 voting can a mod close and record this