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Something i do is murder emcees on the daily..
pay me, they call me the champ like bailey...
Im outta here where the fuck u been?...
U gon' roll yoself a blunt...im roll myself a cuban..
im doin me...what the fuck have u been doin..
probly stayn softer then a fuckin fig newton...
babygirl be bangin but she aint even shootin..
so let me beat it up, like its someone im abusin..
tell me that ya losin...i laugh at the fact...
ya raps is whack i stack this cash..
smash ya ass if u dare try to dash or clash..
im a titan my writin is off the chain...
put the chrome to ya dome...so u can say ya lost ya brain!

lol

hmmm, the verse is simple, yet it flowed well. It's an "I will do this to you and I will do that to you" kind of verse with not much substance, but I can hear it an audio nonetheless. Keep droppin and show your versatility.

T'em oh pa B

last bar was good, at least you ended well. wasn't feelin the rest.

Lol..This was a joke, i keyed it in like 45 seconds.

-- Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:08 pm --

But thanks

This was purdy kewl, as far as flow goes
just keep writing peep erryone elses work n you'll figure out where you goin' with everything nonetheless a dope piece....now roll it....