I feel like...
The main character flaw of an assassin!
Demonic goddess, a tortuous death
A digital whore, one soul left astray
Earth, now in ashes.
What if, what now.
Death's only lonely vision
was the incubus in illusion?
exposed bones, burning flesh
forgotten graves, decayed forms
fallen corpse, the flags burn!
Tick, tick BOOM!
Entities of life loom.
A faded poet against the landscape
A family portrait amidst the concaved shapes!
Paradox; saving the innocence in possession
the first rights of a guardian
Demons, our lady of lust.
Demonic suicide within the demon's eyes
From out of the darkness, the horsemen ride
Chaos crawls within the land of lost.
Sad songs, snow covered in crimson frost!
Flawed Core
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Re: Flawed Core
"Tick, tick BOOM!
Entities of life loom. A faded poet against the landscape
A family portrait amidst the concaved shapes!" - Nice ass metaphores here Def. Alwayz a pleasure reading your poetry.
Entities of life loom. A faded poet against the landscape
A family portrait amidst the concaved shapes!" - Nice ass metaphores here Def. Alwayz a pleasure reading your poetry.
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Re: Flawed Core
Wonderfully well written. You paint a picture with your vocabulary. And I'm a big fan of anything dark, so this was an instant win.
Keep it up, dude.
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Keep it up, dude.
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