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Due: Evolution Decides
Topic: Evolution Decides

This is my check, Evo when you check supply a due date and topic!

due date: Dec. 27th, 10 pm est. (if that's koo with u)

Topic: Science taking over (u can play that anyway it comes to mind)

if either of those don't work for u just let me know

Check, will have my verse up tomorrow!

alright no rush, i havn't even started cuz i wasn't sure if u'd be droppin or not

I been pondering on things, watching the world wander on Wings/
Past its own limits to predicaments only labeled as Sins/
Shredding the genome on a quest to dethrone the Mother of Nature/
Betting its wee own to best the codes of Mother and Rape Her/
Followin the Nazi causing indoctrine of maiming the Savior/
Tainting the flavor of life, on a quest for the ultimate Aryan/
But we might as well all faggot fuck our cousin and Marry Em!/
The genetic defects reflect the twisted aspect of our Intelligence/
Don't forget Mace and Agent Orange, delivering a Hellish Kiss/
Cuz its not just practical, we love developing the Irrelevant/
Dildos and jacuzzis don't move me, but got made with Elegance/
And the time we spend mining, shinging, and cutting Fly Stones/
Could be better spent trying to terraform in Sierra Leone!/
Put these thoughts to the test, try and fix up this fucked up Mess/
Got armored whips and extended clips, but our troops without Vests!/
Because of the cost per unit, so bullets tear straight Through Em/
But we can train replacements, I guess it costs less than to Suit Em/
Now dont get me wrong, technology has helped us Too/
But on the real, as it gets worse, we get more fucked up Too/
Forgetting our roots, ya know, those things attached to the Tree/
Not the base file you save to when you turn off your PC/
Mankind forget its purpose, and now lives only to Destroy/
How'd you think we'd turn out if Nature had its own nukes to Deploy...

The bible won't exist, there's not a SacredVerse involved,
Future Evolution...is what the latest version's called,
We'll have women re-created with stilleto shoes that shine as Japetto's new design,
Except with jello cubes for minds and pedals through their spine with the metal screws combined,
And the men are just the same, but less demented in the brain,
Bare-feet yet still the same, we're all invented for a game,
Puppets of the earth, our own creators were created,
Strung by number sequence, we're now makers of the matrix,
When hurt, our skin will break and we'll get plastic infections, it'll happen in seconds,
And soldiers will be built and use magnets for weapons to send out static connections,
They'll have active perception to seek out every crafted invention,
We'll be wiped out reguardless, in a rapid succession,
Experimental projects, get shot for test results,
A robot holocaust, then they'll drop the next assault,
This world's a tin can, we'll clearly need improvement,
But with Professor Uncle Sam, each theory will be proven,
The green will turn to grey, and the blue will fade away,
Unless we learn to stray from the truth that's made today,
But with questions like what if, then you gotta wonder why,
We'll find that heaven's just a myth, and God's another lie...

Uppin on Votes!

Wow, I liked the way Evolution discredited SacredVerse in the first bar "The bible won't exist, there's not a SacredVerse involved,
Future Evolution...is what the latest version's called," - a diss within a topical battle, nice.

Then this string of multies that still stayed on concept "We'll have women re-created with stilleto shoes that shine as Japetto's new design,
Except with jello cubes for minds and pedals through their spine with the metal screws combined" - in the very next bar. Excellent

In topical battles I vote on subject matter, flow, multies and entertainment.. I don't expect punchlines, but I saw a few in both (Sacred - dildo/jacuzzi line and Ev's very first bar).
Subject Matter - Sacred
Flow - Sacred (Ev had a few stretched bars)
Multies - Ev (rain away with it)
Complexity - Ev (Sacred's simple bars such as "helped us too/fuked up too" were laced throughout his verse)
Entertainment - Ev's
Last but not least Punches - Ev

vote = Evolution
SacredVerse, I look forward to more topical joints from you. Their excellent reads.

appreciate the time put in for the vote riggz, still uppin

Nice dickride Hate. Next time read the verses before you vote instead of just copying the first persons final vote...

0-2 Uppin on votes...

lol, its koo, there's not many votes coming in through the battle grounds, but u can discard it if u feel it was unfair sacred, not a problem with me, although he took the time to read it, break it down, and the categories weren't exactly the same either, he left out punches and entertainment but included execution of topic..n e ways its ur call, the battle was still fun for me

this was an entertaining read for me.. topical battles need to happen more here mann

topicals usually are based on 3 main cats, so im judging based on that..

relevance - both approaches are good, but evolution edged this quite apparently
creativity - the opener for evolution was very creative as much as the rest of his verse..a point above sacred's
flow - evolution took this for sure though

it was a cat sweep in those categories, but nonetheless sacred's diction and articulate flow is still impressive. My vote though goes to Evolution.



btw go vote in other battles u bitches