Hip Hop Forum

Pages catch fire
then throw flames like Ghost Rider
and spark ya brain like a car chase with no tires
Too many similes ?
Feel free t'critique
but if you start dissin' me
I'll make you start spittin' teeth
We can go blow for blow
or flow for flow
in a C-17 above the ocean, bro
loser jumps and becomes shark chum
while the sun sets and the dark comes
winner gets a sparked blunt
but I quit smokin'
so I take one pull, then throw it
over the hatch door and tell the pilot t'close it
You're a done deal
so it's on t'women with pump heels
and asses like Jessica Biel's

This was purdy good, different....but dope
need's a bit of work in some parts
the punches n whatnot...but the flow seemed decent

I was feelin' some parts tho....the endin'...just cuz that's my girl.....

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hahahahaha