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this rap shit isn't a gimick
i live it love it learn it
than give you my exizibit
to the finish
i'm something others will try to mimick
cuz i always on the pivot
coppying me,
man they really must be trippin
standing out side the prism
living inside the rhythm
beats and feats.. man,
people always tryan diss em
but i wont miss um
i'm sinking shots like scottie pippen
in this system
the only way out is in
but i dount ya win
when you can't even begin round the bend
as i pound my pen
up on this paper
i roll it smoke it blow it
than trip up on the vapor
theses haters
can picture me rolling wit 20 playaz
so i keep it str8 unlike Idaho MAYORS
pop some bayer
this rap shit is like the mouth of gators
theres biting moister
an sharp conveyors
but theres also perpitrayers
lil insects who sick like incest
but only cause other sprayers
now let this be a warning
i'm killin ya fuckers prematurly
lik unplaned abortions
im snappin ya outta preportions
now lets see who is swarmin
i'm takin this game
like Utah and them Mormons

hahahaha
biters beware!!!!

just a key hook me up with some feed

I like how you did your style on this one
really a dope piece when you think about it to tell you the truth

the only way out is in
but i dount ya win
when you can't even begin round the bend
as i pound my pen
up on this paper
i roll it smoke it blow it
than trip up on the vapor
^^^^^that was sick the way it flowed together a nice piece!

"i'm sinking shots like scottie pippen" -whoa, talk about a throw back jersey. There were a few lines that seemed elementry and probably could've been dismissed all the way. I'm not diggin' the structure of this verse too much as the way it looks right now, gives it a choppy feel. I got the "Idaho Mayor" part, just wasn't diggin' the way you dropped it.

It was ok D-fy... but I've seen better from you.