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I go bananas, writing manuscripts in cabinas, where atlantis is
the sand is thick, the vantage is glamorous, until the land vanishes

Israel will command the ship, but is it ill when Iran is hit
cannons lite like candle sticks, these plans are sick and scandalous

our foreign policy is like a Rambo script, mixed with a Soprano twist
Im just an analyst, find me on the tube, I'll be with diane at six

all you go to do is channel flip like Obama, the man is rich
something like a philanthropist, I see why you ran as a change candidate

now your fans are pissed, and your without telepromoter to answer with
when you don't stand for shit, guess what, you land in it

I'm an unmanaged cyst, rarely this cancerous, I just can't admit
miranda rights, I plan to spit, try to slam the mic, with a gigantic pandas grip

institutionalized like campuses, a suit and tie, expansionist
suitable wive, mansion, kids, beautiful lies, companionship

failed marriages, granted this, I would love to get a romantic kiss
from a glamour chick, too bad they are all oral like an evangelist

I want to see more checks than Santa's list, I can't handle risk
expect to lose when you gamble chips, some girls are slanderous

the point of view of a mad man is a fantasist, too much cannabis
I ain't a stan of biz, how can these MC's be on a label, they are contaminants

I can't resist, your managment should sue you for damages
when I diss MC's, I'm not writing, I'm painting on blank canvases

I told God that I demand this gift, beyond that the object is inanimate
I think its quite obvious, I go bananas, then I split, back to where atlantis is

to many big words its 8:06am lmao i didnt get no zzzz i was in the studio till 4 than i was sexin ma wife buh anyway the flow is outrageous on this one man im lovin it.!

"our foreign policy is like a Rambo script, mixed with a Soprano twist
Im just an analyst, find me on the tube, I'll be with diane at six"
"all you go to do is channel flip like Obama, the man is rich
something like a philanthropist, I see why you ran as a change candidate

now your fans are pissed, and your without telepromoter to answer with
when you don't stand for shit, guess what, you land in it"

"the point of view of a mad man is a fantasist, too much cannabis
I ain't a stan of biz, how can these MC's be on a label, they are contaminants

I can't resist, your managment should sue you for damages
when I diss MC's, I'm not writing, I'm painting on blank canvases

I told God that I demand this gift, beyond that the object is inanimate
I think its quite obvious, I go bananas, then I split, back to where atlantis is"

I mean you truly paint pictures Plex. Not dick ridin' or nothin' but your name speaks for itself. I don't know if these cats kno how difficult it is to multi-play 8 bars with matching rhyme structures every 1/2 line. That's pulling together 16 multisyllable lines 'THAT ACTUALLY MAKE SENSE AND STAY ON TOPIC". That's damn near perfection for the english language IMO.

Honestly, no bullshitin', you on a whole nother' level of poetic writing dude.

It's great work, man. Take what you said about my Black Magic rhyme and double it.

This was purdy dope...the title thru me off....
LOL!
either way a very nice piece that really had some dope points in it

keep doin' your thing man! this joint was very very nice


I'm an unmanaged cyst, rarely this cancerous, I just can't admit
miranda rights, I plan to spit, try to slam the mic, with a gigantic pandas grip

institutionalized like campuses, a suit and tie, expansionist
suitable wive, mansion, kids, beautiful lies, companionship

those two parts had me like whoa.....very nice man