Hip Hop Forum

This jawn is a piece that had been a couple years in the making. The first verse along with the concept was written almost 2 years ago, but the other half was written this week. A smooth transition from R&B into Hip-Hop...it's something different that I hope you'll all enjoy.

-Y.M.

As far as the beat, the shakers and strings sounded weird enough for me to say something, nothing major, but it was a little annoying until the lyrics kicked in. The lyrics were pretty much generic R&B material, the flow was on point, you did a good job with the singing too. Hope to see more from you. Nice drop.

Mav, you kickin' that mainstream joint. You still sound like a cross between Xzibit & Rick Ross to me (excellent voice for todays genre). I liked this. I would probably bring in a cameo to sing the hook (maybe Jahiem or Anthony Hamilton or somethin).

Go for yours and get paid my man.

classic R&B joint fam... liked the beat... lyrics were dope... so was the hook... ill production but of course cause Rock did it... haha... very nice flow fam... this was good shit man.. makes me wanna hit the studio again either the one i record at or take a trip to Chicago haha... good shit fam keep up the good work homie... can't wait to hear the whole album...

hmm this beat is trippy i pretty cool..

uhmm hook may be a lil loud uhmm..i hear what you tryin to do though..props.

verse 1 ..good deliv..matches the mood of the song.

verse 2 ..probably liked this one a lil better tho

the effect on the last hook is kinda crazy

This is a Nice RnB Joint..Homie...keep doin ya thing

Kurse wrote:Anger Manij'ment shuttin it downnnnnn

...too easy.

wooooooord!!!!!!