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Entertainment

no flipping, biting, DR, hate votes please

thanks

due 72 hours after both check in

GL

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I'll make my advance now, while you fall off like backin' cars out semis without seein' if the ramp's down
Can't believe I'm competein' with this damn clown, I'll make "AR-V" look bad like graffitin' ya campground
wreck 'em all when I'm steady blazin' the semi, I saw victory comin' every single day I've been ready
this win's like balancing a block, and makin' it steady, set to give you a bad ending like Jason and Freddy*
If beatin rappers is "eatin' rappers", he'd probably ask the question, why are we starvin' dad?
my bullets strike hard like farve to add, this fool's worthless, no wonder why this "ARV"** is bad
even Jay*** looks like he wonders why you spit, you're wastin' my time, like stoppin on the phone to chat
I'll rip every bone in half, they know ya wack, so watch me rip "A"**** to pieces like shreddin' oakland hats!
ya rhyme generic, personal defining's what it lacks, you can't lie to us, we all know ya lyin' in ya raps
line up and watch, file in the back , and watch me shit on this "pussy vet*****" like Diaretic cats!





*The movie Freddy vs. Jason had a horrible ending
**Stands for Approximate Retail Value in the business world
***Avatar
****The baseball team the Oakland Athletics has an A on their hat
*****Veterinarian, Pussy = Cat (Arv's a veteran if didn't already know)

-- Sat Dec 19, 2009 12:59 pm --

You can disregard the 72 hours rule, 48 more hours to drop, I hate DQ wins.

Watch this! Easy victory..

ill show ya how to nameplay without stretchin.. this is lyrical rape at its freshest!!
Now witness mah jabs "in-fekt" like bacteria was raiding ur fleshes!!
the punches are proven when the bruise is seen bright blue and green
see the only place "effects" is 'special' is in computerized movie scenes!!
What i spew is mean.. im maulin gays, leave u with gashes n solid scrapes
another knocked off the list.. Im quick to X-"mas" off like cancelin holidays!!
I'm not ok, im great so what we talkin bout? That ur names chalkin off wins?
Nahh lets talk about him cuz we know M-ass and I aint talkin bout Slim!
And M.E. only sounds good when I talk about Arv, that beast keeps gunnin..
its like i tell u 'get on ya knees n close ya eyes' cuz u cant see me comin!!


gl


1-0 mass for my lateness


edited a typo

Naw man, it's 0-0. No worries.

Cats
Punches - Arv - was on another level
Personals - Tie
Flow - Arv's was much easier tah read
Wordplay - Arv
Entertainment - Arv

vote Arv


I enjoyed reading both, but Arv just came a bit better. Closer than the Cats may suggest, but overall Punches were the only landslide...for Arv!

I liked both guys in the PUNCH area. Mass "ya rhyme generic, personal defining's what it lacks, you can't lie to us, we all know ya lyin' in ya raps
line up and watch, file in the back , and watch me shit on this "pussy vet*****" like Diaretic cats!"

Arv - "What i spew is mean.. im maulin gays, leave u with gashes n solid scrapes
another knocked off the list.. Im quick to X-"mas" off like cancelin holidays!!"

As for flow tho, I got to give it more to Arv. I couldn't spit fast enough to follow Mass's and as bios as that may seem that's pretty much my only for giving Arv the edge.

Nice battle both of you. I actually read them yesterday but decided not to vote until I read them both again outloud.

vote - Arv

2-0 me

Punches:arv

Personals:mass(i didn't really see any from arv)

Flow:arv (the rhymescheme nicely connected)

Wordplay: mass( im throwin nameplay in this as well, and mass seemed like he put in more work)

Entertainment:arv( overall the punches and multis took it for me)



(mass u did well with the rhymescheme too, i just didn't find it as smooth throughout, judging on these categories it was a decently close battle)


well that's 3-0 arv's win..u've gotten better from some of the older shit i seen from u mass..don't let a loss be the end of u



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