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Arv vs Joey Piff
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 2:51 am
by Arvincible
5 bars
Cats
Punches
Personals
Flow
Wordplay
Entertainment
no flipping, biting, DR, hate votes please
thanks
due 72 hours after both check in
GL
CHECK
Re: Arv vs Joey Piff
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:17 am
by Frank Black
Nike!
Re: Arv vs Joey Piff
Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 3:56 pm
by Arvincible
Alright Watch this..
Arv is Armed with missiles aimed, I got a hot verse..mah bars will sizzle mayne,
Kids got no chance!! like an electrical stove he's got them artificial flames !!
This bitch is lame, someone give this nerd love, his stupidity is unheard of!!
I told the guy to drink some Grey Goose...and nigga started sippin bird blood!!
imma make it a quick battle.. give em a dick saddle, we know dude will mount,
I found what this dude's about.. see he's actually Big P with a renewed account !!
Once again the venom I spew is out, n I should wear a condom cuz im soo cocky,
Ur flow's choppy, mah punches throw Rockys like the messy burger im leavin Joe Sloppy !!
One of a kind, Arv has no copies.. and a foul to those who claim they official
while the only time we hear Jo-king is when someone laughs n names his initials!! (j/p =P)
Re: Arv vs Joey Piff
Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 7:41 am
by Frank Black
will post tonite.
-- 20 Dec 2009 05:00 --
almost forgot man!!
once Arv see's my verse
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He'll beg me to let him revise, LMAO what this guys asks is funny
Like some kind of NFL defensive staff "Lemme take a linebacker something!"( a-line-back)
Ok ya rap battle carrer is shot just thow it in a coffin
yea i admit ya under-rated, so ill mention you SUCK more often (ouch)
You dumb fuk ya bars aint the tightest you got niggas fooled why you lyin?
How "ARV" invicable With a "Aids Related Virus" (Not Possible)
ARV be bitchin my words leave you with fear of affiction
Arvs future will "Die net bound" Like carrers in the kitchen!(dinnette)
This man is in dissalusion He spit his verse and he already started losin
He a fag His true sex? "ill peice this fake together" to show this "man of confusion"(Mannequin Fusion)
Don't understand dont vote.!
Re: Arv vs Joey Piff
Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 7:02 pm
by SacredVerse
This was tight, a close battle, don't let the Cats convince you otherwise!
Flow: ARV - This was the only landslide category, but due to it being Text, not as important
Metas: Tie, both Textcees came with shit I've never seen before, and thus get props on my behalf
Punches: ARV, but only because of the filler "You suck" line by Piff and the fact that some of his bars were worded wierdly (Last 4 lines could have been devestating IMO, just improperly worded)
Personals: ARV, he had 2 great personals (Last 4 lines) to Piff's decent one (The sickness one)
Enjoyability: Both, they had new concepts, as stated in Metas, and there wasn't really any played out lines (except the you suck)
Votes: ARV
Re: Arv vs Joey Piff
Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 2:32 am
by Riggz
Arv had some good shit.. I could actually picture him on stage battlin Joey and the crowd going "oooooh" after lines like "This bitch is lame, someone give this nerd love, his stupidity is unheard of!!
I told the guy to drink some Grey Goose...and nigga started sippin bird blood!!" --"ooooh"
&
"imma make it a quick battle.. give em a dick saddle, we know dude will mount,
I found what this dude's about.. see he's actually Big P with a renewed account !!" -- hahaha hella funny if you remember Big P.
Joey, I HATE EXPLAINED BARS... period. I don't care if you feel like most catz up here are too stupid to get it or not... let the freakin' verse stand on it's own without the fukin footnotes. I really think you forced 90% of your punches and I only heard crickets after most of your bars. Maybe you rushed it or something, but i'm used to you droppin' wittier punches than this.
Vote = ARV
Re: Arv vs Joey Piff
Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 4:34 am
by Absolute
IMO...niether MC really "came" at the other person. Not to say this battle wasn't entertaining, just...your battling, stay relative and personal. For example (correct me if Im wrong, plz) ARV only had 2 bars that could be used directly towards Joey (the last 2), and Joey had 2 as well (suck more often/aids)> Every other line in this battle coulda been used in another battle. That being said..
ARV - I really enjoyed you whole bar that concluded with the bird blood. I aint been on here long enough to remeber Big P, bbut judging from riggz reaction it must be a hell of an insult. Nice closer. Overall your verse was enjoyable, except the personals isuue previously stated. Nice verse.
Joey - IMO your dinette line was your best. I see where you were going with your closer, but I agree with Riggz, coulda been worded better. Tough bar to deliver though, Ill give you that. Overall you may have edged in the punches category.
This battle could have went either way, but i'll close the same way I opened; this came down to the personal bars, and IMO, ARV's hit harder, so
ARV GMV. 3-0 ARV, nice battle y'all.
Re: Arv vs Joey Piff
Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:00 am
by Frank Black
thanks guys. good battle arv rematch soon?
Re: Arv vs Joey Piff
Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 10:59 am
by Arvincible
some one close this
gb joey
Re: Arv vs Joey Piff
Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2009 6:31 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
-closed n updated-