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Mutual & Haz Collab

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 7:56 pm
by - Mutual -
i didnt intent to drop two pieces this close this was supposed to be done a while ago but here it is anyhow
Haz:
Sorry If i Rub ya Wrong i Just Had a Trojan Explosion
Best Believe The Love Is Long Each Win Could Motion The Ocean
No Trends For This Soul Forget Expense As a Hole,Forget Boasting
With Joking,On a Serious Note i Gotta Be Out Coasting The Open
Have my Release With Word's And Start Smoking Like Potions ..
Failure Gave What i Least Deserved Forget Hoping With Notion
Lyrically i Shove Dudes Away Recieving A Pass,Got Stiff Arms
Anxious To Shoot Believing a Draft, you Couldn't Ride My
Flow Down Seizing a Raft,Cause i cook'd rhymes Like
Draddle Skills n Seasoned My Craft, Fatal Still
Breathing in Grass The purest Ship No Naval Drills
My Weed is the Last of purest Piff,Blow fables Thrill
it's Fine this Brings a Dream To Realization, a New
Stimulus Plan With Green To Heal The Nation..
Quit The Games Like a Sore Sport,I Spit The Flames
From The Earths cores Fort,Door To Door Torch,
Anyone Judging Me Before Court Better Find More Source
like gun shops i Store Force So take That D-Tour course..

Mutual:
Lord We're Torn From What We Once Were When Born The Darkness Is Triggered
Stored With Gore This Man's Spirit Formed A War That Left Us All Disfigured
This Hate Positioned Will Quicken To Straight Submission To Kill An Infinity
The Greats Dont Listen,Risen,The Fakes To Prison Just To Thrill My Ability
Hidden An Agitated,Good Riddens Immaculated Left The World At The Bottom
Visions Complcated,Missions Thank God We Made It As You Sleep Their Forgotten
Explosions Of Trojans,Implosions Are Frozen A Mind Trick In The Night
What You Believe, Lies, There's No Tunnel, Don't Look For A Light
No End To This Hole Minions Sending Control Through Hidden Lines In The Dark
Defending My Goal,Apostles Mending My Soul,Playing On My Mind Like A Park
Ventilating These Lines Demonstrating That Rhymes Can Fall Short
Questioning God's Existence Something Big From A Small Thought
Rookies Way Down Low Know I Release Vats Of Acid A Timed Ventilator
Where As You An Me,Juxtaposed,Need To Step It Up Find An Escalator!!
Complextions With Bad Intentions Personified To Weather Rain And A River
Floods Minds With Fluctuations,Did You Call An Ambulance Cus It's Pain I Deliver
Complications Thrown Up Into Space Remain Unknown To What I Erase
Racing So Abjudicate I String My Rhymes Together Like I Write With A Lace

Re: Mutual & Haz Collab

Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 2:02 am
by - Mutual -
Aye Mayne you seem to be on a feedin spree yeah well thanks for the feed and it did originally start off as a topical but it did stray off but still came out nice overall so yeah thanks fo the feed

Re: Mutual & Haz Collab

Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 2:19 am
by Mass Effex
Haz had decent flow, good multies like always, although some tend to sound like fillers sometimes. Good drop, I felt it.

Mutual, good vocab, good flow, all around nice verse in my opinion.

Good jobs guys.

Re: Mutual & Haz Collab

Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 2:20 am
by - Mutual -
Thanks For The Feed Mass

Re: Mutual & Haz Collab

Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 5:53 pm
by P.T.R-ins
this was nice read...tho i did like mutuals verse more

This Hate Positioned Will Quicken To Straight Submission To Kill An Infinity
The Greats Dont Listen,Risen,The Fakes To Prison Just To Thrill My Ability
Hidden An Agitated,Good Riddens Immaculated Left The World At The Bottom
Visions Complcated,Missions Thank God We Made It As You Sleep Their Forgotten
Explosions Of Trojans,Implosions Are Frozen A Mind Trick In The Night
What You Believe, Lies, There's No Tunnel, Don't Look For A Light

this is best part of mutuals v imo..

tho it seams that Haz had(or have better rhymin scheme)

Quit The Games Like a Sore Sport,I Spit The Flames
From The Earths cores Fort,Door To Door Torch,
Anyone Judging Me Before Court Better Find More Source
like gun shops i Store Force So take That D-Tour course..

best part imo..

Re: Mutual & Haz Collab

Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 3:36 am
by - Mutual -
thanks for the feed

Re: Mutual & Haz Collab

Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 3:47 am
by Riggz
not quite sure where you guys were going topical wise, but you had some nice metaphores and multis... "Quit The Games Like a Sore Sport,I Spit The Flames
From The Earths cores Fort,Door To Door Torch,
Anyone Judging Me Before Court Better Find More Source
like gun shops i Store Force So take That D-Tour course.."

"Complications Thrown Up Into Space Remain Unknown To What I Erase
Racing So Abjudicate I String My Rhymes Together Like I Write With A Lace"

I would say make the subject more clearer to your viewers... we all sway like branches though.. so no biggie... evolve

Re: Mutual & Haz Collab

Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2009 3:53 am
by - Mutual -
thanks for the feed

Re: Mutual & Haz Collab

Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 1:45 am
by Quix
Lord We're Torn From What We Once Were When Born The Darkness Is Triggered
Stored With Gore This Man's Spirit Formed A War That Left Us All Disfigured
This Hate Positioned Will Quicken To Straight Submission To Kill An Infinity
The Greats Dont Listen,Risen,The Fakes To Prison Just To Thrill My Ability

i LIKED THIS! ^^

Hidden An Agitated,Good Riddens Immaculated Left The World At The Bottom
Visions Complcated,Missions Thank God We Made It As You Sleep Their Forgotten

Nice ^

Explosions Of Trojans,Implosions Are Frozen A Mind Trick In The Night
What You Believe, Lies, There's No Tunnel, Don't Look For A Light

meh, decent!

No End To This Hole Minions Sending Control Through Hidden Lines In The Dark
Defending My Goal,Apostles Mending My Soul,Playing On My Mind Like A Park
Ventilating These Lines Demonstrating That Rhymes Can Fall Short
Questioning God's Existence Something Big From A Small Thought

Wasn't feelin this ^


Rookies Way Down Low Know I Release Vats Of Acid A Timed Ventilator
Where As You An Me,Juxtaposed,Need To Step It Up Find An Escalator!!
Complextions With Bad Intentions Personified To Weather Rain And A River
Floods Minds With Fluctuations,Did You Call An Ambulance Cus It's Pain I Deliver
Complications Thrown Up Into Space Remain Unknown To What I Erase
Racing So Abjudicate I String My Rhymes Together Like I Write With A Lace

Nice finish!!! Nice verse Mutual...By far the better verse on this Collab!!!!

Re: Mutual & Haz Collab

Posted: Thu Dec 17, 2009 5:03 am
by - Mutual -
Thanks Quix