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JHaze
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Closer To My Dreams

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Another rushed recording, no mixing done yet, and ignore the intro lmao, but yea all feed is appreciated and will be returned

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real ish nice melo beat flow cool delivery nice swag and everything was there on this one ma nicca good shit.
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Not bad J. I liked it. Like you said, it's not the mix down.. so I can still hear the clicks.. but I"m just trying to figure out the right mastering to make it at least sound like this. But this was actually a nice mellow track man. Much Respect. The talking at the end is actually kind of cool LOL (makes it seem real).

You gotta hit me up on how to get that quality sound man.
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Post by P.T.R-ins »

well to melo for my taste but lyrically is on place..nice song(i said song cuz its to soft) but its ok
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