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Votes on all cats, First to 5, 3-0 KO, 10 bars Due a week from now. Good Luck fam!

W/E heres my drop, It's a little rusty cause I did it in 16 mins....good luck mayn.


There once was a cracker n' everything he typed was a joke//*1
I'd make "Casper disappear" but he's already "white as a ghost"//
You lost to The Pro then you started to bitch n' complain//**2
It ain't at all cause of votes, it's cause your spitting is lame//
So get with the game n' just admit that you lost//3
N' I'd do a name flip, but I just like flipping you off//
You're pissing me off, I'm a retire this barrier//4
Spit fire in his area to give his "Nextell" like the "wireless carrier"//***(next L)
The Mercenary got more punches than prom day, Ekom's gay//5
I'm a put a "red dot on his forehead" like he's "from Bombay"//
N' I'll bomb away if you think you're testing street thugs//6
The piece Will erupt when I'm stepping to bust//
I'm a put a period after E n' have you be the next to see slugs//7
Now "E.KOM's the premier site for Ecstasy Drugs"//****
You ain't got no gat so you better not be saying my name//8
Cause I'll "cap Koms" quicker than "playing some game"//*****
I'm crazy n' deranged, You ain't ready for the war that I bring//9
Name my punches "Frodo" cause "it's lord of the ring"//
I'm the "vet" that killed all the "cats" in the category you listed//10
You'll never get the glory you missed it, that's the story of this kid!//


Opener.....check.
Multies.....check.
Similies....check.
Metaphor..check.
Wordplay..check.
Nameflip...check.
Self hype..check.
Creativity..check.
Flow.........check.
Structure...check.
Closure.....check.

* Personal. He's white.
** Personal. He lost to The Pro
*** Wordplay n' simile. This will be his second lost.
**** Name flip
***** Name flip n' metaphor


There, I'm working with all the cats from the cat so don't even bother breaking my shit down.

not bad...i actually made it thru da whole verse...lol...ill vote wen E drops..

Yeah i liked the little star triangle he drew at the end of his piece.

Lmao thats all you liked?

I dont think I should say what i liked and didnt like so EkomS doesnt use it for his advantage. And lets stop the freeposting.

i'll post my vote when hommie drops

k lost track of the date for a minute and my net's been acting gay but i'm still gonna drop.. only got 7 bars and im out in a few seconds


this is like the 4th matrix with a sequel-revealed/
so there must be only 'One~N' the way i turn Neno-to-Neo/(one~n=n~eno/Neno-n=neo)

i'll keep the insults public to show a diss-play/(display)
this kid's-gay, dont advertise for CAPCOM when ur MIDWAY/(Mortal Kombat is by MIDWAY)

i'd vacate for another week if i ever ducked-the-rookie/
u might've "checked" all the 'cats' but never fucked-a-'pussy'/(no explaination needed..)

i'll bring 'brutal music files' with a 'beat~in-attached'/(beat~in=beating)
and keep these 'punches short' 'fired' like ya 'reach'~in-a-'match'/(reach-in=reaching)
like Casper u'll be just as 'ghostly' when u 'leave-in-a-flash'/
schoolin emcees, when i'm done with u i'll be teachin-a-class/

like a 'glitchy messenger' i'll make ur 'AIM-skip'/
typin dyslexic is the only time u'll make my name-flip/

ur impatiently waitin-to-lose, i'll drop less than 10 so consider this breakin-the-rules/
i'll leave ya fate-in-the-news,"Asian Child Labor"... so get back to makin-my-shoes/(Made in China)

well im out, peace

I took of some of the cats because i thought its retarded so cry if you want,

Opener - Ekoms
Multies - Neno
Similies/Metaphor - Ekoms
Wordplay - Neno
Personal/Punch - Ekoms
Creativity - Both
Flow - Ekoms
Structure - Neno
Closure - Ekoms

You got to be kidding me right? I got similies n' personals yet my names not there? Whatever, let's commence with the votes.

NENO wrote:You got to be kidding me right? I got similies n' personals yet my names not there? Whatever, let's commence with the votes.

Uh stfu? i voted fair so quit your bitching dipshit... you got personals yeah you did but it was stupid the kid ain't white his mexican just light skined which makes that line moronic

well he combined personal with punches so that's probably y, although i used more similies than u

...just becuz u have something doesn't mean the other person doesn't have it as well...either way all cats were used by both of us even tho vocab wasn't included

He didn't put vocab under the cats so not my problem

yea i know.. which is y i said even tho vocab wasn't included

Holy Fuck. Nobody wants to vote for battles because they have to go through all this junk. I don't see why people are all a sudden clouting the fucking battles with bitching/crying/fighting/

Just stop the shit : ]

My vote will go here later.