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Ain't Ready to Stop.
Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 5:27 pm
by Haz
Uh ..
Bar Fa Bar, Speech Fa Speech i'm By Far a Star
How I Beat Elites Yall Stuck With Dirt Like Beneath ya cleets
ya Teeth is Tweeked Your To Weak To Eat ..
I've Struck With The Flow Man,Punches With No Hands
Dudes Get Heated Cause They Stuck In The Snow Fam ..
While I Blaze The Mic Till it Open Windows like Introduct The Program
Causing The Destruct Of Yo Land, Pro grams is What I Hit ..
I Spit Off So Much Potency Canines And Sperm Banks Quic Ta Notice Me
Must I Quit? Hopefully .. So Addicted To Gettin Twisted
Setting Vicious-ly High Standards fa These Bitches,Hammer
Big L Wishes, I'm Healthy As Hell With Big Pun Fitness
Wish Me a Well Point in My Life,Don't Point in The Night
Towards a wishing Well That could Help Me See The Light
I Turn Debree Ta Hype,Chi Ta Trife M-c'z Ta Pipes N Weed Ta White
I Read The Right,Learn & Breathe in Life Then Read N Write
Till My Breed Exceeds it's Type Which Leads Ta Types Of
Evolution Only Adapting To Surroundings Could Free In Sight..
Success Is Before My Eyes Like When My Belly Button Had a Cord Inside
I Feel Like The Freedom Riders Before The Rides ..
I Feel Like a Holocaust Victim From The Poorest Side..
Degraded Like God By Athists Who Take it As a Job To Say Shit
How God Didn't Create This Or Races Sayin How Do u Explain Spaceships
I'm Sick Of This Shit ... Here He Go Digusting Like a Hairy Hoe,
Turning Um Green Like Mary Flow,Quit Horsin Around No Cherrio,
Carry Mo Weight On ya Shouldlaz To Get in Shape Fa a Colda Scary Show!
Lifes a Written Think About The Likes Of Bitten...
Cause You Did What He Did And He Did What She Did Same Type Of Scriptin
In This Life We're Given,Yet We all got Different Types Of Vision
Mine's a Shrine Of Me in The Hall Of Fame Of Inclined MC's,
Sippin Henny With Pac While smoking Reggie With Popp,
I Got No Newyear Resolution i ain't Ready To Stop ..
Re: Ain't Ready to Stop.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 1:07 am
by -MenaCe-
$.@MB!T!ON.$:
Bar Fa Bar, Speech Fa Speech i'm By Far a Star
How I Beat Elites Yall Stuck With Dirt Like Beneath ya cleets
ya Teeth is Tweeked Your To Weak To Eat ..
Feelin That...
I've Struck With The Flow Man,Punches With No Hands
Dudes Get Heated Cause They Stuck In The Snow Fam ..
While I Blaze The Mic Till it Open Windows like Introduct The Program
Nice Wordplay line was ill...
Causing The Destruct Of Yo Land, Pro grams is What I Hit ..
I Spit Off So Much Potency Canines And Sperm Banks Quic Ta Notice Me
ill.....
Must I Quit? Hopefully .. So Addicted To Gettin Twisted
Setting Vicious-ly High Standards fa These Bitches,Hammer
Big L Wishes, I'm Healthy As Hell With Big Pun Fitness
Line Is Sick...good Shit
Wish Me a Well Point in My Life,Don't Point in The Night
Towards a wishing Well That could Help Me See The Light
I Turn Debree Ta Hype,Chi Ta Trife M-c'z Ta Pipes N Weed Ta White
I Read The Right,Learn & Breathe in Life Then Read N Write
Till My Breed Exceeds it's Type Which Leads Ta Types Of
Evolution Only Adapting To Surroundings Could Free In Sight..
Im Feelin It...
Success Is Before My Eyes Like When My Belly Button Had a Cord Inside
I Feel Like The Freedom Riders Before The Rides ..
I Feel Like a Holocaust Victim From The Poorest Side..
Nice...
Degraded Like God By Athists Who Take it As a Job To Say Shit
How God Didn't Create This Or Races Sayin How Do u Explain Spaceships
Ok..
I'm Sick Of This Shit ... Here He Go Digusting Like a Hairy Hoe,
Turning Um Green Like Mary Flow,Quit Horsin Around No Cherrio,
Carry Mo Weight On ya Shouldlaz To Get in Shape Fa a Colda Scary Show!
Decent..Not Bad
Lifes a Written Think About The Likes Of Bitten...
Cause You Did What He Did And He Did What She Did Same Type Of Scriptin
Nice Multi's
In This Life We're Given,Yet We all got Different Types Of Vision
True...
Mine's a Shrine Of Me in The Hall Of Fame Of Inclined MC's,
Sippin Henny With Pac While smoking Reggie With Popp,
I Got No Newyear Resolution i ain't Ready To Stop ..
Good Closer....
Overall This drop was nice it had alot of good wordplay and creativity and your flow was on point...Good Shit
Re: Ain't Ready to Stop.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 8:15 am
by NoVeL
Damn HaZ same as always....
"Swagga sharp like a dagger aligned with 4 knieves
Get tha point?"
-NoVeL
Re: Ain't Ready to Stop.
Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 11:51 pm
by The Gonz
Damn, this is yer nicest piece in a while. Had some ill wordplay, multies. Flow was on point. Would make a sick audio. Get at it lol!
Re: Ain't Ready to Stop.
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:50 pm
by Phasewon
doppppe shit, I can't front on anything in this joint...
"Bar Fa Bar, Speech Fa Speech i'm By Far a Star
How I Beat Elites Yall Stuck With Dirt Like Beneath ya cleets"
^the rhyme switch ups you displayed in the opener
and other spots throughout the verse displayed your
cadence for solid structure and knowing where to insert
the rhymes, the shit was consistent and kept my interest
all the way through, nice shit.
Re: Ain't Ready to Stop.
Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 8:06 am
by QwarterZ
Must I Quit? Hopefully .. So Addicted To Gettin Twisted
Setting Vicious-ly High Standards fa These Bitches,Hammer
Big L Wishes, I'm Healthy As Hell With Big Pun Fitness
^^^^^ That was dope!!!!!!
I'm really feeling this no doubt! really put that work in on this one....keep writing
Success Is Before My Eyes Like When My Belly Button Had a Cord Inside
I Feel Like The Freedom Riders Before The Rides ..
I Feel Like a Holocaust Victim From The Poorest Side..
^^^^Just had to quote that aswell
really feeling the realness in that part keep doing you tho'!