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[Phasewon]
Fake rappers get splattered like cake batter, and manslaughtered
I'll rape your granddaughter, and my squad'll bring the camcorder
Fill your bath water with blood from your severed waist
Split your brains raw, with the chain saw, like Leatherface
I set the bass to hit you in the face and split you
Laser stitch you from the waist and re-arrange your facial tissue
Your brains'll rip through your skull and your temple
And pull out your mental, take the beef to a whole 'nother level
I sold my soul to the devil, for half the price
Human sacrifice, to produce the Anti-Christ, in the after life
I'll go back in time, and make 'em re-write the bible
When I take out every Christ Disciple, with a sniper rifle
Try to rival and you'll meet your maker when The Reaper takes ya
Then you'll greet your savior, and receive a date with Jesus later
All I need's a chaser, some vodka to release the anger
With a decent razor, an eraser and a piece of paper
I'm a freak of nature, that'll take ya to the gates of Hell
Before you break the spell, I'd make Satan take an L
Raid the cell block, let off twelve shots, leave you shell shocked
Sprayin' lead, put your baby's head in your mail box
Lock the churches, my verses'll shock the surface
With more toxic currents than exposed socket circuits
And surges of a couple hundred volts, to jump your pulse
Steady pumpin' jolts, with a thousand CC's of thunder bolts

-- Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:21 pm --

I aint wanna say this in the original post 'cause I
Don't want it to sound like I think I'm the shit, but
Real talk I've been catchin' mad muhfuckas stealin'
My lyrics and posting 'em on other sites or even
Recording them on their songs, which is illegal, so
Please don't waste your time biting. But I appreciate
Any feedback yall.

I can see why they would bite haha,you have some serious fucking skills man,do you have any audios? And where can I find more of ur shit lol

Phasewon:



Fake rappers get splattered like cake batter, and manslaughtered
I'll rape your granddaughter, and my squad'll bring the camcorder
Nice Opener....
Fill your bath water with blood from your severed waist
Split your brains raw, with the chain saw, like Leatherface
Ok punch...
I set the bass to hit you in the face and split you
Laser stitch you from the waist and re-arrange your facial tissue
ill Wordplay..
Your brains'll rip through your skull and your temple
And pull out your mental, take the beef to a whole 'nother level
Good Shit...
I sold my soul to the devil, for half the price
Human sacrifice, to produce the Anti-Christ, in the after life
Nice...
I'll go back in time, and make 'em re-write the bible
When I take out every Christ Disciple, with a sniper rifle
Harsh but sick as hell....
Try to rival and you'll meet your maker when The Reaper takes ya
Then you'll greet your savior, and receive a date with Jesus later
Wordplay is good line is ok..
All I need's a chaser, some vodka to release the anger
With a decent razor, an eraser and a piece of paper
Nice..
I'm a freak of nature, that'll take ya to the gates of Hell
Before you break the spell, I'd make Satan take an L
Ok..
Raid the cell block, let off twelve shots, leave you shell shocked
Sprayin' lead, put your baby's head in your mail box
Again Tha Wordplay is Nice..good shit
Lock the churches, my verses'll shock the surface
With more toxic currents than exposed socket circuits
Tounge Twista 4 real...Feelin It
And surges of a couple hundred volts, to jump your pulse
Steady pumpin' jolts, with a thousand CC's of thunder bolts
Solid Closer..





Overall you did your thing with this one you had a shit load of multi's and creative lines in there. Your punches where ill also..Good Shit Man

Well, honestly, I used to write like this years ago when ripping out vertebras severing heads were cool. However, even back then, they'd point out that my joints had no real substance. No punch towards anything.. just sick minded shit. But hey, I will say this... it was an interesting read.

dig your style

Multies were off the chain, as usual. Sick drop, you never disappoint.

However, maybe I'm the only one noticing this, but you only show up to leave one lick of feedback, then drop a scripture joint. Its a reoccuring event. Seems like you only do the bare minimum to appear active just to justify dropping a piece. Not that we don't enjoy your work, it just seems kinda bogus. It'd be nice to have another active sick cat roaming the forums. Maybe you're just busy as hell or maybe you're just another egocentric emcee, I don't know, its really none of my business. I just know that a lot of cats here respect your talents and would value your input on more than just one scripture joint a month. You're like the Illest Halley's Comet. Take it for what its worth. Again, sick drop, but it'd be nice to see em more often.

^^I feel you, and it's got nothin' to do with ego,
I leave all cats positive and constructive feed, I'm
simply not a "textcee", I only fuck with this shit
to get feed on my lyrics before I eventually record 'em,
so I'm not really a text head, but I see your point my dude.

RainMan wrote:I can see why they would bite haha,you have some serious fucking skills man,do you have any audios? And where can I find more of ur shit lol

'preciate son, just stay tuned, I'll be dropping more
shit pretty soon, as long as you aint lookin' to steal it,
I notice you only leave feed on my shits, if you
just like my joints then that's all good, I appreciate it homie.

Riggz wrote:Well, honestly, I used to write like this years ago when ripping out vertebras severing heads were cool. However, even back then, they'd point out that my joints had no real substance. No punch towards anything.. just sick minded shit. But hey, I will say this... it was an interesting read.

No doubt, I've been told that countless times by
"textcee" cats with a more poetic steez, yet, you
should listen to some of the greatest lyricists of
all time, such as Big Pun, Big L, old Eminem, Kool G Rap,
Royce Da 5'9", fuck with cats with actual lyrical
credentials, not internet poetry dudes.