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Being a lyricist is all about creativity.

The cameras on? I shine, the new paragon, even in prime time, I'm very calm
this is a terror song, prepare a bomb, declare Islam like Farrakhan
the beat is weak, but the snare is strong, all of this stress on the body
makes you want to squeeze a tech in a lobby or set a bomb on a step, as a threat to armani
how can you dress for success in a bad economy, stab these faggots zombies at abercrombie
if you ever see one of them jackets on me, lite me on fire with a match stick promptly
any ways, I belong in flames, psychotic brain leaks like a water drain
we are not the same, I spit from a pad, a high octane rocket launcher, in Concord, Maine
I'm 5'9, feel like I'm in a monster frame, this isn't a persona, I have you'll to blame
I went straight to the hall of fame, you'll are still playing that college game
my styles polished, versatile knowledge, thoughts - too imperative
misconstrued narrative, renewed the Qu'ran just to improve Arabic
accused terrorist, wasn't aware of this, until I reviewed the terror list
I could use a therapist, cuz I abuse generic scripts, I've been sued for shooting parishes
they're recouping damages, my music ruins marriages, in demand artist
smart anarchist, cold enough to drop off a fans carcass in the antarctic
every verse begins with a perfect start because I'm an optimist
purple heart, I've taken a bunch of weak shots from quix
thoughts process, psychologist, write a lot - the top novelist
+politically incorrect+ evolved to this its like I lost consciousness
not an apologist, I'm still cold spitting, every once in a while, I get an oohhhh shit, in..
the comment section, like..no kidding, Jay Z..want to see the old style, read an old written
this ain't pulp fiction, the results different, I want to make the site hear me
so I type clearly without the mic near me, simple life theories
if you want to excite, you got to keep tickin, bring all your mite, to incite fury
fuck the why i write series, that shit aged, mine got more nice yearly
this is just rhyming, I'll be doing this forever, fuck writing a punchline
until its just me and hazard battling to find out who is nicest in crunch time

this ain't pulp fiction, the results different, I want to make the site hear me
so I type clearly without the mic near me, simple life theories
if you want to excite, you got to keep tickin, bring all your mite, to incite fury
fuck the why i write series, that shit aged, mine got more nice yearly


^^ Love that rhyme scheme, sick as hell.

my styles polished, versatile knowledge, thoughts - too imperative
misconstrued narrative, renewed the Qu'ran just to improve Arabic
accused terrorist, wasn't aware of this, until I reviewed the terror list
I could use a therapist, cuz I abuse generic scripts, I've been sued for shooting parishes

^^another sick rhyme scheme

This thing was ill, man. I thought the terrorist thing got a little repetitive but its all good, there was still plenty of content. The multis were awesome, you use word combinations that I completely ignore, which compels me to elevate. The flow was slick, plus the fact that your drops are always 8+ bars is always great. It takes a lot of talent to maintain lyrical consistency past the 8 bar mark. Alot of people try to drop long ass posts, but end up with a lot of filler. Granted, this wasn't really a topical or anything, but you never fell off lyrically. Sick shit, as usual.

Thanks man. There was definitely a good portion of this drop that I could have improved.

As for the word combinations, I'll admit in the most modest way possible, I come up with some interesting ones from time to time. Trust me though, you have inspired me a lot more with your word combinations than I have you.

And of course there was no topic.

This Was great the flow the vocab the multies if i wasnt so lazy i would leave the most detailed feed on this ever but sorry mayne i gotta read some more of Ruckus' pieces if your inspired through him lol

my styles polished, versatile knowledge, thoughts - too imperative
misconstrued narrative, renewed the Qu'ran just to improve Arabic
accused terrorist, wasn't aware of this, until I reviewed the terror list
I could use a therapist, cuz I abuse generic scripts, I've been sued for shooting parishes
they're recouping damages, my music ruins marriages, in demand artist, part of it commercial
smart anarchist, cold enough to drop off a fans carcass at the antarctic circle
every verse begins with a perfect start because I'm an optimist


the whole thing was sick but that part stood out to me. Your drops are consistently above average, and I agree with Ruckus, it inspires me to elevate so keep droppin bro.

Plex:




The cameras on? I shine, the new paragon, even in prime time, I'm very calm
this is a terror song, prepare a bomb, declare Islam like Farrakhan
Nice Wordplay right there..Good
the beat is weak, but the snare is strong, all of this stress on the body
makes you want to squeeze a tech in a lobby or set a bomb on a step, as a threat to armani
Feelin That Shit...Nice
how can you dress for success in a bad economy, stab these faggots zombies at abercrombie
if you ever see one of them jackets on me, lite me on fire with a match stick promptly
ill...Sick Wordplay
any ways, I belong in flames, psychotic brain leaks like a water drain
we are not the same, I spit from a pad, a high octane rocket launcher, in Concord, Maine
I'm 5'9, feel like I'm in a monster frame, this isn't a persona, I have you'll to blame
I went straight to the hall of fame, you'll are still playing that college game
Nice..
my styles polished, versatile knowledge, thoughts - too imperative
misconstrued narrative, renewed the Qu'ran just to improve Arabic
Sick...
accused terrorist, wasn't aware of this, until I reviewed the terror list
I could use a therapist, cuz I abuse generic scripts, I've been sued for shooting parishes
Nice Wordplay Here Also..Nice
they're recouping damages, my music ruins marriages, in demand artist, part of it commercial
smart anarchist, cold enough to drop off a fans carcass at the antarctic circle
This Was OK i felt not bad..
every verse begins with a perfect start because I'm an optimist
purple heart, I've taken a bunch of weak shots from quix
thoughts process, psychologist, write a lot - the top novelist
+politically incorrect+ evolved to this its like I lost consciousness
Now That Was ill Man..Good Shit..
not an apologist, I'm still cold spitting, every once in a while, I get an oohhhh shit, in..
the comment section, like..no kidding, Jay Z..want to see the old style, read an old written
Nice..Liked the way that flowed
this ain't pulp fiction, the results different, I want to make the site hear me
so I type clearly without the mic near me, simple life theories
if you want to excite, you got to keep tickin, bring all your mite, to incite fury
fuck the why i write series, that shit aged, mine got more nice yearly
I lIke That...good Shiit
this is just rhyming, I'll be doing this forever, fuck writing a punchline
until its just me and hazard battling to find out who is nicest in crunch time
Good Solid Closer...





Overall Plex this drop was nice it had alot of witty wordplay and the flow was insane you definitly did your thing wit this one...Good job

I don't think most will get how deep this cat really is. I like to read between the lines; here I see the hint of 5%ers in your declarations. Perception... How you are more focused getting indepth then just touching the surface. It's not what Plex is saying it's "how" he's saying it... when he's saying it...
"the beat is weak, but the snare is strong, all of this stress on the body
makes you want to squeeze a tech in a lobby or set a bomb on a step, as a threat to armani
how can you dress for success in a bad economy, stab these faggots zombies at abercrombie
if you ever see one of them jackets on me, lite me on fire with a match stick promptly" -- this ain't just a bunch of multisyllable words hewn together with no substance...

I hear you Complex.. we're not as different as I originally thought we were..hmmmm.

Riggz wrote:I don't think most will get how deep this cat really is. I like to read between the lines; here I see the hint of 5%ers in your declarations. Perception... How you are more focused getting indepth then just touching the surface. It's not what Plex is saying it's "how" he's saying it... when he's saying it...
"the beat is weak, but the snare is strong, all of this stress on the body
makes you want to squeeze a tech in a lobby or set a bomb on a step, as a threat to armani
how can you dress for success in a bad economy, stab these faggots zombies at abercrombie
if you ever see one of them jackets on me, lite me on fire with a match stick promptly" -- this ain't just a bunch of multisyllable words hewn together with no substance...

I hear you Complex.. we're not as different as I originally thought we were..hmmmm.

I agree there is a rhyme and reason to why I wrote them lyrics, the way I did, but it has nothing to do with 5 percenters (which I think is a way to strive for an orchestrated spirituality), nor is it really about religion. It is more about materialism, stereotypes, and pressure, which is three themes that I really touched on.

(I fixed that rhyme scheme on the fans carcass line that Menace pointed out, it just wasn't effective)

dope ass shit, as usual, you never disapoint, homie.

"The cameras on? I shine, the new paragon, even in prime time, I'm very calm
this is a terror song, prepare a bomb, declare Islam like Farrakhan"

^dammmmn, opener was crazy, the rest of the joint
stayed consistent as well but there's too many hard
hittin' lines to point 'em all out, the whole shit was
ill, keep it up.

Ruckus wrote:this ain't pulp fiction, the results different, I want to make the site hear me
so I type clearly without the mic near me, simple life theories
if you want to excite, you got to keep tickin, bring all your mite, to incite fury
fuck the why i write series, that shit aged, mine got more nice yearly


^^ Love that rhyme scheme, sick as hell.

my styles polished, versatile knowledge, thoughts - too imperative
misconstrued narrative, renewed the Qu'ran just to improve Arabic
accused terrorist, wasn't aware of this, until I reviewed the terror list
I could use a therapist, cuz I abuse generic scripts, I've been sued for shooting parishes

^^another sick rhyme scheme

This thing was ill, man. I thought the terrorist thing got a little repetitive but its all good, there was still plenty of content. The multis were awesome, you use word combinations that I completely ignore, which compels me to elevate. The flow was slick, plus the fact that your drops are always 8+ bars is always great. It takes a lot of talent to maintain lyrical consistency past the 8 bar mark. Alot of people try to drop long ass posts, but end up with a lot of filler. Granted, this wasn't really a topical or anything, but you never fell off lyrically. Sick shit, as usual.

^^ cosign

Arvincible wrote:

Ruckus wrote:this ain't pulp fiction, the results different, I want to make the site hear me
so I type clearly without the mic near me, simple life theories
if you want to excite, you got to keep tickin, bring all your mite, to incite fury
fuck the why i write series, that shit aged, mine got more nice yearly


^^ Love that rhyme scheme, sick as hell.

my styles polished, versatile knowledge, thoughts - too imperative
misconstrued narrative, renewed the Qu'ran just to improve Arabic
accused terrorist, wasn't aware of this, until I reviewed the terror list
I could use a therapist, cuz I abuse generic scripts, I've been sued for shooting parishes

^^another sick rhyme scheme

This thing was ill, man. I thought the terrorist thing got a little repetitive but its all good, there was still plenty of content. The multis were awesome, you use word combinations that I completely ignore, which compels me to elevate. The flow was slick, plus the fact that your drops are always 8+ bars is always great. It takes a lot of talent to maintain lyrical consistency past the 8 bar mark. Alot of people try to drop long ass posts, but end up with a lot of filler. Granted, this wasn't really a topical or anything, but you never fell off lyrically. Sick shit, as usual.

^^ cosign

That is incredibly weak. I have left feedback/voted on loads of your stuff over the last year. I was in a rush, I just wanted to leave some feedback. I don't even want to know your opinion, ok?