Hip Hop Forum

the coffin is in my attic, i used to jump in it at halloween and scare litte teens, i guess i wasnt that keen when i was rappin mean, i shouldve used the lean cuisine approach, when i die i dont want you to cry just gimme a toast to the awakening, look to the brighter side of educating, self-educating reading writing all forms of braking the slavery machine, audit the federal private banking system that is ruled by oligarchy of the illuminati just look up the council of 300, and the club of rome all forms of secret society like the trilateral commisioning, the fema training of the police mechinsm, why would we trust the same ol positioning postering into a new world ordering of the people, they think were sheeple meant to be dead bent take it from common sense, im on the field not in tents, im not on the bench but yet i still yeild when theres apparent danger close take it from white folks it aint ez, infact white people can even get greasy, so all yall folks take it ez breathe easy dont take it from me, self educate about the world depopulate structure that we must rape, without the caution tape, i know you people might think im all talk just cause i dont shoot bulk ammo but my writing is the equillivent, i may or maybe not a prophet, i just need your support a reminesence of league of nations, to abolish the private fed, let it be done let it be said, end the fed audit before you caught it, the sickness evolving reminescent of nazi germany and ussr, dont trust these fake ass czars who ride in tinted cars, you can steal this album unlike lars ulrich, tick tick time on the block clock dont stick, who can give a fick about these fickle drizzle topics without the infowars storm sword of the norm im not talking about celebrity gossip, and we gotta focus on the real issue at hand, watch out for the flip flop, stop how they propagand the land turning us racist amongst ourselves, peace dont sell cause theres alot of rebels, then devils, im not speaking to you on a higher level im thinkin its eye to eye like a hot date, can you relate? but if you relate too much you start to lose touch of liberty and freedom like communism, infact they print the stacks, i seen people without a face, like they mustve came from space, or wachoski brothers soundtrack mixtape
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any feedback..? nice jason avatar though.. i dont like the compass and sqaure though lol

Wow, I figured you'd understand that symbolism I posted. I'm dissappointed. You and I could have traded remarks lyrically even. tsk tsk Z-

Fix Ya Structure!!


But the drop isn't bad man i was feelin most parts of this..keep em comin

they think were sheeple meant to be dead bent take it from common sense, im on the field not in tents, im not on the bench but yet i still yeild when theres apparent danger close take it from white folks it aint ez
^^^^I was feeling....well I don't know whether to call it a line or not

either way I felt it very nice write keep doin' you...
except for the structure...LoL, fix that up my dude

otherwise keep writing!