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more of it

Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 7:51 am
by Arvincible
Here's a drop, I'm exercising my multis, so know my intentions in this piece is to do so and continue its relevance lol enjoy


You're transformed by what they say, and Inspired by what u read that
It provokes u with a couple quotes, then ur required to give em feedback
See its dire that you speak facts, and you liars just release wack
Talkin bout you bein higher cuz u squeeze gats? Nah I ain't tryin to believe that
You're desire to succeed lacks, the unknown backbone kid u need some chiropractic rehab
See me Killin it in a verse I'm michael meyers when I lead tracks
Its fire when I free raps, automatic when I'm at it I'm retirin these weak rats!!

See me scopin I aim high the bullets smokin these lame guys they jokin n claim lies, they hopin mah flame dies
U exploding in plain sight, I'm evil there's no equal watch u choke as the pain rise, I see the coke in ya vains climb,
u emotional dames try n think ur fuckin dope with ur wayne lines!! You just quote and rephrase mines,
yeah I wrote these insane rhymes I spit heat till my throat and my brain fries
mah potency stays high cuz now ive opened my game-I used to fight my inner demons now we're both on the same side..

Re: more of it

Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 8:07 am
by QwarterZ
Talkin bout you bein higher cuz u squeeze gats? Nah I ain't tryin to believe that
You're desire to succeed lacks, the unknown backbone kid u need some chiropractic rehab
^^^^ That there was dope, I see what you were doin' tho'

either way I didn't get the first bar I was like....?
then I was like ok, just like a workout regimend
right now you stretchin' it out
then you gon' get to workin' it out
then you gon' be appreciating improvements
which will make you do it more n more
I see what your doing! keep doing you!
keep writing and improving!

Re: more of it

Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 12:14 pm
by Riggz
You gettin' there Arv... keep strivin man. Some of my favorite Multi-writers are Ruckus, Complex, and TOYH... keep workin on it and you'll be added to the list man. :)

I like inspiring cats to be better. ;)