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In circular motion, I imagine fate of the tested
I felt the respected, visualized what success is
traded affection with the hurt, and cold expressions
now my perspective was gold watches iced out necklaces
still dancing, Harlem Shaking, grafitti, breaking...
a fad across the nation, a world following, hating
now erryone suffers, ironically? what is poverty?
is it a possibilty, or is it fate? or pure ability?
I'm still here, never peer pressured into bullshit
claiming I changed life, got high to pull clips
nah maybe I'm goin' to far maybe I'm just thru kid...
I hate getting pulled in, plus I hate gettin' fooled with...
"I'm changing" "I'm growing" "I know who you are before you do this"
I was affected, my mic was ripped from me then defected
I wasn't free, I was disconnected, forgotten, disrespected
knocked down and laughed at, fuck me? ok then...flashback...(end)
now I'm back on my feet step'd up with my head up
I let up, but I kept moving with my palms and led up
so I rewrote my feelings into a 4 page letter


fuck I messed up.....not my best work I'm sidetracked...but keeping hope alive....

dropped some videos on youtube....StraY1200...peep em!

Ya Whole drop was nice homie..your consistancy held shit down. good shit keep em comin.




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"nah maybe I'm goin' to far maybe I'm just thru kid...
I hate getting pulled in, plus I hate gettin' fooled with..."

yeah this was tight nice rhyme scheme fell off a lil
but not enough to compromise the piece. still i liked it you were attempin to dig deep and it showed illy man

illy

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still dancing, Harlem Shaking, grafitti, breaking...