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Shining Down
Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 10:04 am
by QwarterZ
Maybe I need a bit more clarity, a lil' bit a visionary
clear eyes incendiary, I toss it amongst theives n then I bury
my hopes n dreams in the weary, withered notebook in which I carry
I was told if I vary from the road in which dominions marry
then my opinions scary, or it's more like my opinions varied
all their spits is clear-lay, milk basked all I shit is dairy
call him intolerant, lactose, burpin' up the molotov, crack flows
edit his program callin' it asshole, don't shit ramadan plataeu
I feel so good I'm shifting clouds, look up and spitting down
move quicker then hitting rounds, shed quicker emitting clout
I stand tall when I'm sitting down, with all my lyrics Shining Down....
Heavenly in essence defintly a presence
desperately defensive beheading adolesence
Shining Down....Shining Down on youuuuuu
LOL I don't know random ass ish just weaved together...don't know if it goes with the actual track but who the fluck cares I'm still here
Re: Shining Down
Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 11:04 am
by -MenaCe-
qwarterzone wrote:
Maybe I need a bit more clarity, a lil' bit a visionary
clear eyes incendiary, I toss it amongst theives n then I bury
my hopes n dreams in the weary, withered notebook in which I carry
I was told if I vary from the road in which dominions marry
then my opinions scary, or it's more like my opinions varied
all their spits is clear-lay, milk basked all I shit is dairy
-Ok scheme..Not bad
call him intolerant, lactose, burpin' up the molotov, crack flows
edit his program callin' it asshole, don't shit ramadan plataeu
-Nice Shit right there...
I feel so good I'm shifting clouds, look up and spitting down
move quicker then hitting rounds, shed quicker emitting clout
I stand tall when I'm sitting down, with all my lyrics Shining Down....
-Nice Ending Bars..Feelin It
Heavenly in essence defintly a presence
desperately defensive beheading adolesence
Shining Down....Shining Down on youuuuuu
This Drop actually had some nice lines in it. i was feelin how you flipped it kid ya wordplay was Nice and ya kept everything consistant. good Drop keep em comin man, your doin good keep up the good work.
return the favor and leave feed on my drop.
Re: Shining Down
Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:19 am
by Riggz
QZ, I will say honestly.. you improve with every drop man... Unlike Men- I felt the beginning was the strongest.. I just liked the way you opened it. I can imagine someone coming on stage, looking the crowd dead in the eyes, grabbing the mic.. and saying "Maybe I need a bit more clarity..." (as the base line hits right after the last syllable of clarity)...Haha, that would be coooool!
Riggz
Re: Shining Down
Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:26 am
by Mass Effex
qwarterzone wrote:Maybe I need a bit more clarity, a lil' bit a visionary
clear eyes incendiary, I toss it amongst theives n then I bury
Kind of a weak multi, good concept though
my hopes n dreams in the weary, withered notebook in which I carry
I was told if I vary from the road in which dominions marry
Good multi, decent flow, deep concept
then my opinions scary, or it's more like my opinions varied
all their spits is clear-lay, milk basked all I shit is dairy
Bad multi at the end, good flow, weak punch
call him intolerant, lactose, burpin' up the molotov, crack flows
edit his program callin' it asshole, don't shit ramadan plataeu
Liked this
I feel so good I'm shifting clouds, look up and spitting down
move quicker then hitting rounds, shed quicker emitting clout
Alright line, it works
I stand tall when I'm sitting down, with all my lyrics Shining Down....
Heavenly in essence defintly a presence
desperately defensive beheading adolesence
Shining Down....Shining Down on youuuuuu
LOL I don't know random ass ish just weaved together...don't know if it goes with the actual track but who the fluck cares I'm still here
Overall nice piece. Decently deep, and pretty good flow.
Nice multi attempts and a lot of multi successes. Keep droppin'