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Smokin Cess swiftly hittin ya block
Im that nigga in the dickies that’s addicted ta Glocks
If u need me, Holla I got a fifth of some rock
Or some hits of some acid thatll have ya trip on ya socks
Keep the heater heatin aint no secrets Im around rats
Man up and surround cats with an M16 that spits rounds fast
And you gonna catch it in ya chest like a bounce pass
So how bout dat? I’m comin fa ya cheese like a mouse trapped
Livin the illegal life, on nights my mama want me out the crib
Im playin Cee-lo right between the street poles and the strip I live
Desert Eagle known to cripple kids, If u aint harder
Than My niggas bout they Mickey’s swig thats down to peel a whig
And since the triggas got no heart you’re fixed to get ripped apart
Stripped and marked while the police out line ya outfit in chalk
On point like Cansecos battin, Put yalls heads in Halo fashion
And have yall tired of being stepped on like Vallejos rappers

-- 17 Nov 2009 02:11 --

Vallejos rappin= The Click...old school Cali rap group

I ain't got nothin' against this style when I'm listening to it (to each his own), but it rarely does much for me in text; however, I must say yours was quite amusing in some areas.
"Man up and surround cats with an M16 that spits rounds fast
And you gonna catch it in ya chest like a bounce pass" -- pretty nice similie

Riggz

This was purdy good
I agree that the thuggish ish doesn't really work in text
but either way some of the lines were effective
some not as much as the other...like after the bounce pass the whole mouse trap...it was good but you know
didn't really wow me with that....but good!