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lastnight i was writing drunk while listening to 50 cent, this is the outcome n i decided to post it



i tuck gauges when frustrated, go to the club wasted to bust faces, then hit the bottle after
grab ya broad n smack her to pause the laughter.. i dont create problems, shit i cause disasters
reputation n stature is not a factor, ill send slugs thru the body matter of a cocky bastard,
got torture oddly masterd, n they call me an expert at submission like i copy schafer
when it comes to writin' im everything godly captured, i "run it" like the randy moss of adverbs
i scoff at fractures..
the pain i cause'll mock the rapture, ull hate me worse than the dude who put pac to pasture
fists launch like catapults to collide with ya clavicle, n the butt end of a mausberg massacres your mandible
take a piece of lumber to your lumbar, givin u an outlook more grim than a grunge star thus far
the burner spray n viciously violate your vertibrea in the worst of ways causin burns n sprains till bones crush
its Cise scriptin, so u know when the verse is made the words'll play till the curtains sway n close up
takin down internet nerds n fakes, so after battles im smokin purlpe haze at ercles grave ta show love
dont play baseball.. but i throw the curve ta braves, the illest killers cant murk the way my flow does

thanks alot bro!

Nice punches and word play, Precise... "reputation n stature is not a factor, ill send slugs thru the body matter of a cocky bastard"
"ull hate me worse than the dude who put pac to pasture".. LOL good one

Riggz

precise wrote:lastnight i was writing drunk while listening to 50 cent, this is the outcome n i decided to post it



i tuck gauges when frustrated, go to the club wasted to bust faces, then hit the bottle after
grab ya broad n smack her to pause the laughter.. i dont create problems, shit i cause disasters
reputation n stature is not a factor, ill send slugs thru the body matter of a cocky bastard,
got torture oddly masterd, n they call me an expert at submission like i copy schafer
when it comes to writin' im everything godly captured, i "run it" like the randy moss of adverbs
i scoff at fractures..
the pain i cause'll mock the rapture, ull hate me worse than the dude who put pac to pasture
fists launch like catapults to collide with ya clavicle, n the butt end of a mausberg massacres your mandible
take a piece of lumber to your lumbar, givin u an outlook more grim than a grunge star thus far
the burner spray n viciously violate your vertibrea in the worst of ways causin burns n sprains till bones crush
its Cise scriptin, so u know when the verse is made the words'll play till the curtains sway n close up
takin down internet nerds n fakes, so after battles im smokin purlpe haze at ercles grave ta show love
dont play baseball.. but i throw the curve ta braves, the illest killers cant murk the way my flow does

Wow. This was real good, it reminded me of the old school styles on Illest.

The beginning was superb. The random spurts of alliteration were great.

You kept the flow going the whole time. The attitude was on point, this is your first written in at least a couple years, and its definitely a good return.

Nice drop Precise.

Multi's N wordplay was on point.


Good Shit Precise.