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...is this thing on?

the pot I piss in got a toilet brush
But no handles
So take caution, like walking thru museums
With low mantles
Ganging bangin’ on streets all by my lonely
Must be thespian cause you “act” like you know me

I’m ILL…

So ill I stay strapped to I.V. hook ups
Robbin’ cats in church for the tithes they took up

Forget it…

You wouldn’t understand my style
I played it tight
Lifes a bitch…it’s cause I raised her right

I’m hot…
my man Lucipher from the same block
I ain’t in the game I’m the reason the game-stopped

I SAID "I’m hot…"

highschools rent my verses for fire drills
Damn…
Sometimes I think I’m the only kid alive with skills

The pot I piss in has it’s handles broken
Cause I don’t just “punch lines”… I choke ‘em

Bricks I spit out… Riggz gotta big mouth
Victoria’s Secret… I slipped and let that shit out
Beat my emotions down to the brink of silence
Then hand it a brochure on domestic violence

Here I stand…
Raft-less on the shores of “Skilligans” Island
Like call-forwardin’ I’m “off the hook” stylin’
“Lick shots” but go tasteless… face-it
Live the rest of your life wearin medical alert bracelets

Straight pitiful…

Walkin’ lines between sublime and subliminal
Gotta rip at least thirty lines – minimal

GOT DAMN IT "I’m hot…"

I only drop lines near fire-exits
Then spit safety tips for cat’s who don’t get-it
…it’s the kind of pot piss in… pure and fresh
with a subconscious so dope I failed a urine test…

--Bow, Standing ovation--
aahh fuk it, yall don't get it... blah

Lifes a bitch…it’s cause I raised her right

Bricks I spit out… Riggz gotta big mouth
Victoria’s Secret… I slipped and let that shit out

it’s the kind of pot piss in… pure and fresh
with a subconscious so dope I failed a urine test…

^^^Favorite lines.

The urine test one was sick, I like that one a lot. This shit was pretty good man, good to see you switch your style up from the old school stuff you posted before. Versatility is hard to find in a lot of emcees.

i enjoyed the whole verse rigz u keep dropping better and better evrytime.
this would be awesome on audio, a duppy beat wud compliment this brilliantly keep it up mayne and the urine test line was phat, dope lines are played we all know but i gotta say bruh that was flipped excellently and i wudnt even dream of saying the concept was played.
the victorias secret line was my fav i just dug the flow from the line before but the impact it had on the verse as a whole as in it was like immortal technique wud say "and when god said let there be light/ i turned it the fuck off" jus gave it that extra quality
overall nice man keep em coming

I agree this was nice!
I also felt that urine test line
somethin' I shoulda thought of
either way keep improving man
I'm enjoying the reads!