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My punishin presence leaves niggas slumped on the ce-ment
You either dumpin your weapon, or get pumped fulla lead and I’m
Tryin to push fancy cars, but still I hold more guns then Tom Clancy’s arms
It cant be long, til I see the light, I lived too deep for life, hand me stars
A couple fat Cigars, so I can roll a blunt for Jesus Wish Ms. Hunt could see this
No longer dumpin’ heaters, I learned my lesson now I come succeeding
Tell the sytem fuck the secrets, you pussies can’t fuck or beat this
I’m too rough for streets and too tough for weakness
So crews can get no interludes inside this homicidal spit
I’d make the Bible flip rawer than Spice 1’s self titled Disc
Getting rivals hit, so try to kick it like the Tribe ReQUESTed you should
You either dyin with the rest of your hood or destined for good
Paths you gotta pick before strapped to let the shotti spit
With more flames and hollow tips to get Gotti quick
Now back to the boss, I’m smackin ya jaw for yappin you raw
Back handing the law, walkin a path a black cat wouldn’t cross
Where these cats spittin, I’m back for them all

"I’d make the Bible flip rawer than Spice 1’s self titled Disc" -- haha

however, i was a little confused on this portion of the flow:
"My punishin presence leaves niggas slumped on the ce-ment
You either dumpin your weapon, or get pumped fulla lead and I’m" - was you goin' somewhere with this and I just missed it?

ill inners But u Usually Come Across This Way So i Ain't Gonna Bother Mentioning it. u Kept Comin Back To Previous Rhymes Later in The Drop Like Royce Does Quite a Bit, i Was Feeling That. Drop Was Nothing Special From u ive Seen u Come Harder With Funnier/Wittier Lines So id Say This Was an Upto-Par Drop But it Just Seemed Like u Weren't Pushing Yourself With This One. Always Try New Techniques And Tactics Just To Play Around And Give a Different Delivery. That Said The Whole Drop Was Delivered Smooth as Hell, ur One Of The Best On The Site at Stringing Rhymes Together.