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My Faith (dont sleep on this shit you fucks)

Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:23 pm
by JHaze
Some shit from awhile ago but im thinking of using these verses on a track, im writing a third verse now, lemme know what you think, the first might start a lil slow but the 2nd is crack


listen
im yellin out loud man just open ya ears
the gates gettin close im approachin in fear
the inside should be filled with most of my peers
man i hope that theyre here, im tryna be focused and clear
see this whole lifes crazy, its filthy but its true
and we all take it for granted im guilty of it too
but..
most lessons never learned, fuck the knowledge in my brain
simply my hearts empty, head hollow just the same
my ambition is missin so ill swallow all the blame
but i promise i will change for the scholarship or fame
as for right now the horizons lookin dark
ayo faith isnt real til you find it in your heart
some people pray nightly with a message for the savior
but these words arent prayer, they just beggin for a favor
so let me some it up, one sentence, time to listen
i do believe in god but religions kinda twisted



its hard acceptin the fact,ya friends rest in the past
so God if you there i got some questions to ask
is the purpose of life just a quest for some cash?
is there a reason for breathin? a message attached?
if you aint agreein' im leavin, and ill never look back
satans a threat to attack, tryna chase me down
teardrops shake the ground and i hate the sound
if theres no plot behind this misery then take me now
ive listened to sermons filled wit biblical verses
contrived for these crowds while they sittin in churches
mans hands aint devine so whats writtin is wourthless
im just itchin the surface yo the truth is underneath
emotions get involved and we lose it in the heat
i live by my concious, sometimes i act stupid
wish i could have been christ but the sad truth is
i'd of got off that cross and fuckin stabbed judas

Re: My Faith (dont sleep on this shit you fucks)

Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 4:52 pm
by The Gonz
Yo this shit was sick! The multies, the flow, the message. Both verses are quotable. Definitely make this an audio.

Re: My Faith (dont sleep on this shit you fucks)

Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 11:04 pm
by CriptoniZer
yeah this wus dope bro, but i think it needs a chorus. good shit.

Re: My Faith (dont sleep on this shit you fucks)

Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 11:04 pm
by CriptoniZer
yeah this wus dope bro, but i think it needs a chorus. good shit.

Re: My Faith (dont sleep on this shit you fucks)

Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 9:48 am
by JHaze
thanks yall uppin

-- Mon Nov 02, 2009 3:38 pm --

come on yall never slept on my shit until i asked you not to