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Aight, checkin in. I'll type my shit up now. G'luck fam.



-$aw

-- Tue Oct 13, 2009 7:52 am --

it's about to be another murder, a plutonic plague un-heard-of, a homicide
turned suicide from a rusted chainsaw once revved pops you between the eyes/ok

come on… do the right thing mookie, tell the truth im the shit and you smell, oopsy!/lol…
And ya mother is just another groupie, who sucks bone more than southern soup cooking/

And I wish you would grab a black and decker, and id grab you by the neck of ya knitted cosby sweater/
And pound ya face into a kamikaze letter, the scene would be the forensics of this chainsaw massacre/

the only time u can crack bones is when you bend ya knees and jerk ya neck bastard/
good luck at swallowing cum through a straw when I have ya face re-plastered/

im tired of this lame ass wanna-be rap dude, you wouldn’t know trill music even if I reached in and slapped you/
so put ya bb’ gun away foo, you don’t have a license to blap dudes admit it…you don’t really want me to come clap you/

id blow ya chains off ya frames and re-wrap you, send ya ass to the geek squad and have them re-map you/
I stay true to the bone, need I remind you?, this broken up razor blade is bound to collapse soon/

he couldn’t cut or chuck bones with an Neurosurgeon in platoon, buffoon/
ya flow is artificial stop watching cartoons and oh yea GMT? We coming out soon/

Setting flame to the streets hotter than the month of June/
With the wd-40 so we can stop all ya squeaks too../

Chainsaw

I'll tell you why...

His lines were more complex. Multies--multiple multies--and punchlines.

Bones--ya verse was--just par. Nothing amazing--seemed like you forced it a good bit.

.........the Truth is out.

Nice drop Bones. Lets get some votes in.

1-0


-$aw

Tek:

Show Me Some Work! I'm Burly.. this girly writes Poems in a Skirt
Chain's Hostile, I'll Replace Fossils by Puttin Bones in the Dirt
-Nice Opener, good nameplay...8/10

You aint gutta and you aint in a Mafia, ya Fake wit ya Urban Crew
I'm Servin You.. Ya wannabe Taliban? Fuck you and your Turban Too
-Na..a bit forced...3/10

Told Ya You Dead, My fists Mold To Ya Head & I got a Bone to Pick
Lonlely Prick, I put Holes in ya Threads just like a Homeless Kid
Ok line, punch landed....6/10

Stop Fibbin Dude, You'll get Torn up - Honestly, $aw's Rippin You
Flow So Sweet, Bury Bones So Deep.. Archaologists Stop Diggin You
Sick line and nameplay is killin him.....9/10

You Wastin Raps while I Blaze Tracks, & now the Geek's Hurt Again
Face the facts, ya got Straight Waxed by a cat who Speaks Serbian
-Nice personal(bout PTR)....7/10

Blow Ya Dome when my Tek Sprays, I Own the Throne on ya Best Days
With Hate Flows, I'll Break Bones then Show the Voters the X-Rays
-Sick shiit.....10/10

Im Known to Retire Rappers with Deadly Scripts like Psycho Actors
Attack and Smash ya Wack Flows.. & Crack Bones like Chiropractors
-Nice line again your playin wit his name lol...8/10

Might be Glovin but Like an Oven, I use my Grill to Melt Ya Raps
Bones Gettin Stronger? Nahhhh.. not even Milk could Help Wit That
-LMAO!! good closer....9/10


60/80


Bones:


it's about to be another murder, a plutonic plague un-heard-of, a homicide
turned suicide from a rusted chainsaw once revved pops you between the eyes/
-Better vocab but line wasn't that effective...5/10

come on… do the right thing mookie, tell the truth im the shit and you smell, oopsy!/lol…
And ya mother is just another groupie, who sucks bone more than southern soup cooking/
-Oopsy & Cooking dont rhyme man...line couldve been nice...3/10

And I wish you would grab a black and decker, and id grab you by the neck of ya knitted cosby sweater/
And pound ya face into a kamikaze letter, the scene would be the forensics of this chainsaw massacre/
Yo your set ups are good but your ending bar just doesn't connect with the rest...4/10

the only time u can crack bones is when you bend ya knees and jerk ya neck bastard/
good luck at swallowing cum through a straw when I have ya face re-plastered/
-Best line yet....8/10

im tired of this lame ass wanna-be rap dude, you wouldn’t know trill music even if I reached in and slapped you/
so put ya bb’ gun away foo, you don’t have a license to blap dudes admit it…you don’t really want me to come clap you/
-Filler...No punch...4/10

id blow ya chains off ya frames and re-wrap you, send ya ass to the geek squad and have them re-map you/
I stay true to the bone, need I remind you?, this broken up razor blade is bound to collapse soon/
-I like that i kno what your sayin....8/10

he couldn’t cut or chuck bones with an Neurosurgeon in platoon, buffoon/
ya flow is artificial stop watching cartoons and oh yea GMT? We coming out soon/
-Filler...no punch 4/10

Setting flame to the streets hotter than the month of June/
With the wd-40 so we can stop all ya squeaks too../
-Na you shouldve endin this strong....4/10


40/80






This battle was dominated by Tek no dought about it. He just had more nameplay and punchlines in his verse (Which is needed in a battle..lol) so he basically walked all over bones with his. And yo bones homie your gettin way better man your structure is on point but your just not ending your barz strong they start off good but just dont sting at the end. Just work on ending your shit off with a powerfull punch and you'll be knockin em dead..







V/Tek

okay so...

ChainSaw...

like Menace said u dominated this entire battle... i don't think ur shit was forced... but one of ya lines to me kinda stuck out as weak...

"You aint gutta and you aint in a Mafia, ya Fake wit ya Urban Crew
I'm Servin You.. Ya wannabe Taliban? Fuck you and your Turban Too"

reason why it was weak to me cause it didn't make sense to me at all... thats just imo...

but the rest of ya battle verse just killed him last line was a fuckin KO... plus ya stayed on flow too i liked that

"Might be Glovin but Like an Oven, I use my Grill to Melt Ya Raps
Bones Gettin Stronger? Nahhhh.. not even Milk could Help Wit That"

lmfao wow...

bones...

u try to use multies in ya battles but alot of em aren't multies... the lyrics u have are okay... but nothing special... the most decent bar i liked out of this whole verse was...

"id blow ya chains off ya frames and re-wrap you, send ya ass to the geek squad and have them re-map you/
I stay true to the bone, need I remind you?, this broken up razor blade is bound to collapse soon/"

forced but it was efficient... i mean if this were to go on a beat... u really wouldn't have worthy material to flow well with it... shorten ya lyrics don't drag it out... i got hella bored of readin ya whole verse cause it was so long i mean u go long during the beginning of ya verse and at the end its short as fuck... didn't like the way u set up ya verse didn't stay consistent...

so all in all my vote goes to ChainSaw

3-0 KO Tekniq wins..