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Alright Illest, No Sleepin

Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 11:16 pm
by TekniQ
Just got back from work & blayzin an L. Figured I'd pop off a bit. Lemme know what ya'll think.

Check it..


So I guess I'm back Illest.. I've heard your Hall Was Hiring
I'll bring the fire while ya'll sleepin, like some Faulty Wiring

Bear witness to my sickness, my Writtens Can Scare Pariahs
Bitches Who Dare To Try Em end up Wishin I'm Their Messiah

I push the hottest scripts, youd think Im Shovin the Devil
Bust On My Level? Saw gets hot, without Cuttin Thru Metal

Everyone's a rap star.. always so Cleverly & Heaven Sent
but like Obama's Birth Records, I Never See The Evidence

Trust me when I say I'll Start Sprayin & I'll End You Guys
& leave ya seein lights like Star Gazin on the Enterprise

Shit Dun Phase Me, Kids jus Hate Me & my Fly Tongue of War
with Hits like Jay-Z, I Pitch So Crazy I got the Cy Young Award

Nouns're bound to surround ya like Rounds from Two Glocks
Got a pound to reach heaven then took the Crown from TuPac

You Collapse to ya Knees cuz you can't Match wit my Frees
plus I Battle With Ease, the Greek Gods make Statues of Me

If rap sites were British theyd be a Parliament of Groupies
who couldnt even see Saw like they got Carded at the Movies



Haha, aight then.. Hit me wit some feed folks.. always appreciative.

-$aw

Re: Alright Illest, No Sleepin

Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 11:34 pm
by -MenaCe-
Çhåiñ$âw wrote:
Just got back from work & blayzin an L. Figured I'd pop off a bit. Lemme know what ya'll think.

Check it..


So I guess I'm back Illest.. I've heard your Hall Was Hiring
I'll bring the fire while ya'll sleepin, like some Faulty Wiring
-Alittle basic but not bad..


Bear witness to my sickness, my Writtens Can Scare Pariahs
Bitches Who Dare To Try Em end up Wishin I'm Their Messiah
-Na im not really feelin that one..


I push the hottest scripts, youd think Im Shovin the Devil
Bust On My Level? Saw gets hot, without Cuttin Thru Metal
-Sick..good shit nice name use...


Everyone's a rap star.. always so Cleverly & Heaven Sent
but like Obama's Birth Records, I Never See The Evidence
OK...


Trust me when I say I'll Start Sprayin & I'll End You Guys
& leave ya seein lights like Star Gazin on the Enterprise
-Not bad...

Shit Dun Phase Me, Kids jus Hate Me & my Fly Tongue of War
with Hits like Jay-Z, I Pitch So Crazy I got the Cy Young Award
-Nice..

Nouns're bound to surround ya like Rounds from Two Glocks
Got a pound to reach heaven then took the Crown from TuPac
OK...

You Collapse to ya Knees cuz you can't Match wit my Frees
plus I Battle With Ease, the Greek Gods make Statues of Me
Na...could have been better... its filler

If rap sites were British theyd be a Parliament of Groupies
who couldnt even see Saw like they got Carded at the Movies
-Umm...Na its not doin it 4 me considering most of the members here are older then 17-18..




Overall not a bad drop man im feelin ya style and how you actually drop punches and i see ya multi's there not really killer ones but they are there and thats what matters.. Good Drop Homie!

Keep Em Comin....

Re: Alright Illest, No Sleepin

Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 3:02 am
by Haz
So I guess I'm back Illest.. I've heard your Hall Was Hiring
I'll bring the fire while ya'll sleepin, like some Faulty Wiring

LoL This is Funny..

Bear witness to my sickness, my Writtens Can Scare Pariahs
Bitches Who Dare To Try Em end up Wishin I'm Their Messiah

This Was Straight More Along a Filler.

I push the hottest scripts, youd think Im Shovin the Devil
Bust On My Level? Saw gets hot, without Cuttin Thru Metal

Word Def a Hot play on ya Name .. Nice Wording

Everyone's a rap star.. always so Cleverly & Heaven Sent
but like Obama's Birth Records, I Never See The Evidence

Lmfao funny shit

Trust me when I say I'll Start Sprayin & I'll End You Guys
& leave ya seein lights like Star Gazin on the Enterprise

This Was Straight ..

Shit Dun Phase Me, Kids jus Hate Me & my Fly Tongue of War
with Hits like Jay-Z, I Pitch So Crazy I got the Cy Young Award

i Liked This

Nouns're bound to surround ya like Rounds from Two Glocks
Got a pound to reach heaven then took the Crown from TuPac

Got a Prince EA/ Canibus Thing Goin On ..

You Collapse to ya Knees cuz you can't Match wit my Frees
plus I Battle With Ease, the Greek Gods make Statues of Me

This Shit is fire "In my Opinion ...

If rap sites were British theyd be a Parliament of Groupies
who couldnt even see Saw like they got Carded at the Movies

Could of Been Worded a Lil Better , None The Less Decent ..



Anyways Good Shit you Def Have A Lot of Potential i'm Looking Forward 2 Seeing you Drop More .. 7/10

Keep Dropping

Re: Alright Illest, No Sleepin

Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 4:31 am
by P.T.R-ins
dis is some cool and funny read:D
nice drop enterprize lol



You Collapse to ya Knees cuz you can't Match wit my Frees
plus I Battle With Ease, the Greek Gods make Statues of Me

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If rap sites were British theyd be a Parliament of Groupies
who couldnt even see Saw like they got Carded at the Movies


my two favorit bars of this spit...good good good:d

Re: Alright Illest, No Sleepin

Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 6:16 am
by JHaze
Everyone's a rap star.. always so Cleverly & Heaven Sent
but like Obama's Birth Records, I Never See The Evidence

Trust me when I say I'll Start Sprayin & I'll End You Guys
& leave ya seein lights like Star Gazin on the Enterprise

some nice lines in here bro good shit keep droppin

Re: Alright Illest, No Sleepin

Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 1:56 am
by complexity
So I guess I'm back Illest.. I've heard your Hall Was Hiring
I'll bring the fire while ya'll sleepin, like some Faulty Wiring

[dope]


Bear witness to my sickness, my Writtens Can Scare Pariahs
Bitches Who Dare To Try Em end up Wishin I'm Their Messiah

[nope]


I push the hottest scripts, youd think Im Shovin the Devil
Bust On My Level? Saw gets hot, without Cuttin Thru Metal

[dope]

Everyone's a rap star.. always so Cleverly & Heaven Sent
but like Obama's Birth Records, I Never See The Evidence

[dope]

Trust me when I say I'll Start Sprayin & I'll End You Guys
& leave ya seein lights like Star Gazin on the Enterprise

[nope]

Shit Dun Phase Me, Kids jus Hate Me & my Fly Tongue of War
with Hits like Jay-Z, I Pitch So Crazy I got the Cy Young Award

[nope]

Nouns're bound to surround ya like Rounds from Two Glocks
Got a pound to reach heaven then took the Crown from TuPac

[nope]

You Collapse to ya Knees cuz you can't Match wit my Frees
plus I Battle With Ease, the Greek Gods make Statues of Me

[dope]

If rap sites were British theyd be a Parliament of Groupies
who couldnt even see Saw like they got Carded at the Movies

[dope]

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Dopes = 5

Nopes = 4

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