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I'm stuck..between these 2 hooks.they're the same but
different ..anyway . i got my verse and P'z touching his up..if not we can try something else...let me know soon..

I like the second one a lil better.. less hate and more introspective reflection.... damn I got deep with that one haha

but for real I like the second one better but just by a hair

i personally like hook 1 alot... i know their the same but hook 1 has like more "oomph" to it... so i like hook one...

@JIR ..hey thanks for the outlook on this one.haha hit it right on the head as far as the differences between hooks..we actually made the second one first..then thought it might be a lil 2 Emo..haha

@Lawgix were just waiting for Kurses vote..1

We Were Supposed Collab The Other Track, Not This!...Whatever

either one it doesn't matter which one ya'll use... i liked the first one but whatever it don't matter to me

This Aint For My Collab, My Track Was An Original Beat I Made. This Is Some Mixtape Shit.

im gonna go wit da 2nd one...even tho ur askin for kurse n lawgix opinion...lol but watever....2nd one to me sounds smoother....first one is straight too...honestly no one would kno da difference if u hadnt posted it up here...lol.....but yeah shit sounds sick...that beat is fire as fuck too...i could def drop some hot shit on that....id like to hear dis track wen its finished

Okay to clear this up..this track WAS what we originally made to do the Colab with..P'z not feelin this too much(not our best track..that's 4 sure) but i do think it's worth doing...


There is another Track wich is waaayy tighter than this imo..and it's an original beat made by Petrafyne..That's the one he expected to see here..I'm most likely gonna P.M. you that track Kurse and Lawgix...


So P you sayin you dont want in on this one?..all i know is i aint wastin my 16 and hook that i recorded and mixxed for this....

@Viral...haha good 2 see ya..stay tuned we're goin through our archives and undones so ..there was somethin i had you in mind 4 ..

I Just Spoke To You On The Phone 3 Hours Ago, I Already Told You What Was Up.

sounds good....let me kno wats good...i think this track needs to be finished ASAP tho...i dont see whats wrong wit it....lol...but i can see how P might not be feelin it...i do dat shit for my tracks sometimes and scrap and re write it...lol or change it up so it sounds different...

Yeah..i dig it..it's Perpetual elevation, we keep trying to make every track better then the last so when it doesnt exactly come out that way in your eyes, it gets discouraging....that's why i posted it this way to get an outside opinion before we make any premature decisions.....

yeah i def kno wat ur talkin bout...cept in my case i dont really care to ask anyone else..i do tho sometimes n usually i end up never finishin the track because i dont feel like going back to it ...i got like 15 or more un finished tracks...its pretty sad i know..hahaa

Petrafyne wrote:I Just Spoke To You On The Phone 3 Hours Ago, I Already Told You What Was Up.

yeah i know we did but then you posted after we spoke...

Petrafyne wrote:This Aint For My Collab, My Track Was An Original Beat I Made. This Is Some Mixtape Shit.

^^
aight i just wanted to make sure that we do something with them that they CAN put on the illest mixxtape or whatever if they choose to....