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Written to Biggie ft. The LOX- Last Day

this is the start of it, theirs gunna be atleast another 12 bars and then maybe another 32 after that





Its all fucked up, They say you sleep when you die
So every minute you in it you should reach for the sky
Pain is part of the game, its no reason to cry
Theres screams from the schemes that these demons devise
Seeds turn to teens but their dreams are a lie
so they feind for the green while their bleedin' inside
you cant blame the preachers, or the teachers they tried
how the fuck can I die if I dont believe Im alive
now dont get it wrong, theres no testin' my faith
I accept that Im blessed with every step that I take
but I'll wait for the day theres no breath when I wake
I aint sure about life, I know death isnt fake
made a promise to myself that i'd never love a hoe
and I roll wit some homies but I dont trust a soul
its up to you get yours, I know ima get mine
ill be grindin im fine, takin time wit my rhymes
and inside of those lines lies the finest designs
im blind to a dime and these diamonds that shine
if im over ya head then ill decend from the spaceship
if you wanna cheat death be remembered for greatness

Man everytime i read one of your writtens, I can always perfectly flow it

AMazing job man, Im hoping to see more


edit: I can also relate to the message in it, Which makes it that much better

ok ok.. ...lol. this shit was FLy Nikkuh! i liked it 100% word is born keep it coming!

thanks yall uppin

ill drop man...i like the wordplay in this and your flow is on point