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Don't Blink

Posted: Mon Sep 14, 2009 4:57 pm
by Haz
Yall Don't Feel Me Everything i Write's a Cactus i Right a Casket
For Anyone Who Dislikes My Practice,Yall Probably Hate The Game
Bitter Player's Cats Who Turn Into Quitter's Later,Suicidal Feeline's
Purposely Chokin On Litter Paper.. Sorry To Burst ya Bubble Like a
Twitter Raper But it's in My Nature To Dodge Shots And Deliver Chaser
Everything's Two Sided Like The West When Pac Had Untightened His Vest
To Meet With Tyson Direct, Suge's Time Of Writing The Check's
Was Coming To a End,Yall Act Like This No Biggie But I'm Gunnin Thru ya Trend's..
Lil Fake Fuck's, Shape Up Like Mohawk's, No Talk .. Save It
Like a Nun Fella's .. I'm Good For a Rain Like A New Umbrella
I Run Hella Lap's I'm On Track With Pussy Yall Pussy'z On a Track is Wack
Lacking Hookie! Gettin Schooled..ya Joint's Ain 'Jumpin Testin Pools
That's Pretty Sad, Like a Depressed Cutie Give It a Rest Groupies..
Quit Hating, i Don't Feed Off Negative On a Anerex Cue B...If it Aint Anerexic ..
It's BOLEEEMIC i Throw It Up
Like Who Ever Can Catch it shitz Contagious N i MEAN IT!
I Look At Yall And Recieve a Puss Image
Trying Has No Purpose Like Buyin a Dutch With No Weed To Put in It
i'ma Be Bury Ya Guy'z No Worry i'll Fry you Niggaz in A Hurry Like
Keith Murray On Viie..My Bars R Crystal Clear U Won't Blurry My i's..
Law Yer Stand's Done Like Let The JURY DECIDE!
My Weapons "Ray'll" J Ya Like The Love Star
I Tap The Underground Like a Bugg'd Yard i Spank The Bitch Yall Net Thug'z Far
From This Zanee Flow Get Popped Bye Drug Bar's ..
Yall Worth ass i'm Known To Sir Pass Like a Gentlemen's Club Card..
(Uhhh)
Quix you a Played Dude With Gay Move's It's Proved
Your 'Battle Cyph Diss' Was Also Used Against Tre Tru!, Tre Tru It Up!..
Quix You is Nut's..
i'll Have Um Confirm Shit your Barely anything Like worm Shit,
Ya Clique'll Turn To a Old Simpson Character Watch It Burnz Quick..
Your Term's R.I.P'd , Rest in Peace Might as Well Call it 'Bullets', Locked In a Weaponry..


Tell Menace STOP! His Rep's One Track!
If He 'Pop Up' I'ma Smack My Step Son BAck ,
"Into Place" Like CHECK! The 'Weapuns Packed'
This Dude's Weak Not Even Middleweight
He Hold's Little Weight Mr. No Patience Turn Into Chizzle Face..
When i Judge Ya Verse's
i See a Cartoon Like Elmerfud Ur Worthless! you Scrub Get Murk'd Quick
illest Mind's is Like The FUCKING CIRCUS! Yall In a Room Of Mirrors
Can Only See Ya Selve's You Can't Adapt In The ERA! Where U Can Be
Ya Self.. Being Real's Like a ERROR, i'll Remain The Paul Bearer..
Next To The "Unda Takers" Keep Drownin illest i'ma Gun Ya Faker's
illest Minds a Bunch Of Hater's,Lookin At Me , Crunching Paper..

Re: Don't Blink

Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:42 am
by Quix
OPPPS i blinked :(

Re: Don't Blink

Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 4:57 am
by TreTru
My Laptop's assin out so i aint got speakers to listen and feed da chambers right now.. this was a good read..
pretty intricate..IMO..lots of nice concepts...
this is a cool text drop, or even a freestyle with no beat ...
as far as audio goes though i do think you switch rhyme vowels a lil too often...still pretty dope though..

From This Zanee Flow Get Popped Bye Drug Bar's ..
Yall Worth ass i'm Known To Sir Pass Like a Gentlemen's Club Card..
^^^
coo flip..

Suicidal Feeline's
Purposely Chokin On Litter Paper.. Sorry To Burst ya Bubble Like a
Twitter Raper But it's in My Nature To Dodge Shots And Deliver Chaser

^^
I liked this line deliv and flo was sik


Your Term's R.I.P'd , Rest in Peace Might as Well Call it 'Bullets', Locked In a Weaponry..
^^
flo here was good too. coo concept

Tell Menace STOP! His Rep's One Track!
If He 'Pop Up' I'ma Smack My Step Son BAck ,
^^
I would've liked if you held this same flo and scheme for a few more bars..

all in all Good shyt .. 1