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-MenaCe- wrote:Listen Up Motherfuckaz!!!



MenaCe:

These Minds are Designed to draw the Line on who ever you can find any kind and Type a Person..
Throwin thunder while tha Lightnin Worsens! Witness what happens when the Righteous Mergin!!

I like them rhymes, strong start.

The Rest'll Fold while we take control with a hold that can't be Tarnished or Pried Loose..
Look into us and Find Truth disrespect and expect to be broke down they'll have to use Cartilage to Find You!!

The punch could have been a bit more effective. I still liked these lines though.

Surprised Fools? well next time this is guaranteed that you won't be Na not the Least Shocked..
Have Niggaz freeze up makin Knees Lock, Sit and bleed gettin hit consistantly like when Quix Release Shots!!..

Nice. Good way to give props to your crew as well.

Just kickin it with exquisiteness makin it look easy on some Real Shit..
Like a billy Club even wit a short Bar By far i'll be makin sure that you Feel It!!!

Decent.

This squad is always Down to Attack like a freight train when we come a 'Round On A "Track"..
and you ask..Why my Barz R stretched? well there like ya necks i juss love the Sound Wen they Snap!!..

That is sick.

Detach all who's infact in the way of us have the few chewed and smacked with an Awkward Vibe..
Wanna Try? Step foward and get ran over by the illest minds! Stronger then any and all Storms Combined!!..

Good job. Overall. 8.5/10

Lets Get It!!


Mutual:

When i erase-a-mission you take this phase-to-listen
u need a grade-to-miss'em but as you fade-you-hit'em

Cool.

into the darkness made-a-prison as viscous as whats contained-with-in'em
filled with rage-an-victims sticked up caged-in-prisms

I understand where you were going with that. Good job staying on that rhyme scheme.

sustained-an-glistenin just listen to how it glistens
if u cant handle the heat get the fuck out the kitchen

Simple. Good enough though.

heat-does-burn you've failed to even cheat-your-turn
get beat-an-churned smack you off of ya feet-ya'll-learn

No idea what you were trying to say at the end.

all the pain-an-hate thats gets you to frame-the-fake
we gain-the-shakes from the main slain-an-baked

Alright.

aim shame-an-take the game's trained-to-fake
not sane fame-is-quaked reign god lame-an-staked

A lot of rhyming, just not that vivid.

I'd give that verse a 7/10. A couple lines that I simply didn't understand.


Lawgix:


this collaberation is a disaster waitin
whenever u and ur crew get together its an exaggeration

Right.


i've mastered patients whenever i'm faced with complications
when i solve em its a pleasure for me to kill ya'll like masterbation

Decent wordplay, nothing outstanding.

i smash ya face in cause lacerations you cut n
paste in lyrics so much u remind me of pinchy quit fakin

The ending was kind of weak.

n frontin this hoes nothin do somethin ya fuck ur bluffin
gruntin like a man get the wind out of ya skirt ya can't stomach

Alright.

menace told me to go off at the line of scrimage to block.
of what? i say fuck a concept i'd rather be takin subliminal shots!

I like that line.

at... oh... ya'll thought i was gonna state cats, bet ya hate that make ya cringe
cause the only shots u take is when u play with a syringe... fag

Cool finisher.

7/10. A couple bars that were not as good as the others. The wordplay was a bit too simple for my taste too.

MOE:


its time-dat-he-crys, cuz he wants on our dicks but get dis puss-off-mine...
and the only time "2" n "5" got money was when reggie bush-got-signed//
(nice try)

^^^^^^^

when given these hits i wont cushen-mine, so i'll leave ya in-hell-ya-bitch...
in dis "game" ive left "bones broke" more than N-F-L-Blitz//
(dat hurts)

^^^^^^^

so finish-ya-shit, and wake up cuz in his dreams only time-he-blastin...
hes losen his head in his lines while illest mines-be-laughin//
(yes we are)

Cool.

now da grinds-be-crashen, and this kid cant quite handle-da-fight...
cuz da only time he make da shit bright when deres a candle-ta-light//
(faggot)

Cool.

now ill strangle-ya-might, like deres a band around ya biceps...
where you at now bitch? ina casket cuz you couldn't fight-yet//
(lol)

I didn't like that line.

watchem disect "bones" cuz da phonie-got-pumped...
he frontin da wrong "checkers" so da homie-got-jumped//

Not the best way to finish it.

(bitch ya dead)

7/10. Good verse. I don't think you said that much besides that you're going to fuck some people up, which I guess is the concept of this drop.

Drop Tha Nail In the Coffin!!!

Quix:


YA'LL KNOW,
I'm at dah Top and MAh Glockz Inclined tah pop yah Mindz, so Just Stop those Rhymez!
we don't understand you Bitch, plus ya'll wouldn't 'Stand for Shit' in a Wash-Room Line!

Not feeling the punch.

Truth or Dare Faggot; I Dare you tah seek Quix cuz i'll Tare you tah Pieces!
cuz MAh 9 millie will have you 'Hitting a Wall' like a Parapaleegic!

Haha. That is awful, but a good line.

your Sweet like Jelly Flavorz! I'll Send shotz tah yah Skull and leave yah Belly TAsered!
i never Felt these Haterz ... So watch me 'Up the Level' like Elevators

Excellent.

I'm prolly one of the best here, Maybe Sicker! Lazy drifter wid those Crazy Scripturez!
more info, then JAy z's Twitter! and mah 'Hand Gun' watch over you kids' like a Baby-Sitter!

Ha. Nice.

sorry, but i had tah Inform yah Fagz, that dah don is back, and i Confromed mah Swag!
Back tah Writing as Fast as Lightening now that i Divorced the Rag! (Bloodz!)

Nah. Not feeling this one.

hung up dah steal, but still put u in touch wid god! jUST get a grasp of mah spirtual Capacity!
cuz now that Illest mindz Here, i 'Imagine your all Fucked' like Virtual Reality

I see what you meant there. Not my favorite line.

8.2/10 - The drop was strong, not as good as that other piece that you have in the scriptures.

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