Hip Hop Forum

A new topic, solve it, i'm already deliverin
shiverin bodies, drink the liqor men
a veteran, never lose motto printed
a pendent as a devil head just laughin

malicious others, I’m sorry for the delivery
river be long, so I run for uh eternity
incredibly retarded verses talkin to each other
conversations interestin, people talk louder

dislikin this huh? Grammer not on point huh
well read on, congrat the one who runs
I’m a writer, a freestyler on the mic
But no difference, my mood just strikes

again... WAY too basic for my taste doesn't really have any flow... cause the lines from the bars are so short... would sound terrible on audio...

co-sign ^^


keep at tho dude, you got potential!!