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4 Bars.

Check N'

deadline?


its up to you. it can be 30 minutes time or 30 days time. it dont matter to me. but i aint dropping or commenting again unless you put a deadline.

i dont mean to be a dick but you got a habit of no showing.

yeah thats because i do shit besides stay online all day really. i feel what your saying.

the 29th.

thats the due date.

check and good luck

Like i Said Good Luck.

-- 30 Aug 2009 21:41 --

uppin for cee4...again.

sorry man my bad. its been a crazy weekend haha. this is the first time ive been home since friday. i`ll edit this post with my 6 bars shortly.

VIDEO OF DYNAMIQ AKA JOEL VENOM



Should be easy enough to get but..
Bar 2 - collagen injections give you Jay Z lips
Bar 3 - David Carradine = the dead guy from Kill Bill
Bar 4 - Lady Dy/Di = Princess Diana

vote up.

It's Obvious Dude Can't Afford Grim When I Boost Ether
So 'C-Oughta Stay In His Place' - Before I 'Report Him To The Zoo Keeper!'

.Vs.

Its time to off another fag,
Its a colostomy u had if u got it in the bag!, this Venom`s antidote causin repression
Yeah u off the top with no question, ur hairlines like the economy how its lost in recession!!

Top 10 On The Site? 'Not Jew!' - i've Yet To See This 'Pagan' Make It
Judging By the Threads He Post - (Cee's Known To Talk Till Ya 'Blue In The Face Like A Skagen Bracelet!')<< Lmfao.. Good Shit

I ‘finish the prey’ someone call amen,<< Real Played... shit lookin bare up stair like its already fall again
Enough mouth for a hall of men, fat lips aint dated Anniston but sure used to collagen!! (call a Jen) << Lmfao Raaw

So It's Odd To Think Cee Could Kill The Stage When On The Mic
Which 'Ghost To Show..You Have No Chance'..Nor 'Displays Of A Poltergeist' (Clever)

U cant breathe when u pout
Ducked Scott James ur too cheesy to bout, go catch aids since u want the ‘Eazy way out!’ .. Good Shit , Personal & just Was Feeling The line




Cuz U Bringing Tough Talk Without Akward Muscle Is A Loss Earned Double!
Especially When Ya Past Verses Have So Much Senseless Name Plays - I Thought I Was Battling A Crossword Puzzle!

LMAO... Funny.


Camel toe face, pussy breath, I’ll cut out Venom like a sushi chef!,.
<- Lol Alriight Pretty Str8.
This princess gets loyal affection?, watch my punches ‘take out Lady Dy/Di‘ with a royal connection!!
Lol Word.. This Was Pretty Decent Could Of Came Alot Stronger Though.


Cruel Words'll Leave This Tyrant Baffled! Cuz Ever Since My Mood Heard This Shy Kid Battle
I Was Hoping He'd Cedar Light - Next To The Cooler Of Diet Snapple!

Raaaaw...

Assigned to abuser her, u think `Jur ass sick?`…I say `Dyn a sore loser`, out my way im outstanding
U get no play no demanding,

Just Aint Working For Me...


Nvm What His Skill Portrays,I Figured Sluggish - Cuz If Cee Were To Build In Place To Linger Punches
Then We'd See A Show Of Hands!.. - And Children Plays With Finger Puppets! << Funny N Tough...




Punchlines: Dynamiq..
Wordplay: Tie
Nameplay: Cee4
Personals: Cee
Creativity: Dynamiq
Entertainment:Dynamiq
Multis: Dynamiq ( just Strung Nicer).

Overall Vote - Dynamiq...


This Was a Good Battle, Dynamiq Kind Of Danced Around You Cee..You Didnt Come Like U Use 2.. Good Shit Though...

thanks for the vote 1-0

still uppin

Dynamiq:

It's Obvious Dude Can't Afford Grim When I Boost Ether
So 'C-Oughta Stay In His Place' - Before I 'Report Him To The Zoo Keeper!'
-Blah..Weak Opener 4/10




Top 10 On The Site? 'Not Jew!' - i've Yet To See This 'Pagan' Make It
Judging By the Threads He Post - Cee's Known To Talk Till Ya 'Blue In The Face Like A Skagen Bracelet!'
-Ok..7/10




So It's Odd To Think Cee Could Kill The Stage When On The Mic
Which 'Ghost To Show..You Have No Chance'..Nor 'Displays Of A Poltergeist'
-Ok, Could have been alot better...6/10

And..

Nvm What His Skill Portrays,I Figured Sluggish - Cuz If Cee Were To Build In Place To Linger Punches
Then We'd See A Show Of Hands!.. - And Children Plays With Finger Puppets!
Na, ok set up but didn't land....3/10



Cuz U Bringing Tough Talk Without Akward Muscle Is A Loss Earned Double!
Especially When Ya Past Verses Have So Much Senseless Name Plays - I Thought I Was Battling A Crossword Puzzle!
LOL, Nice.....9/10

But See..

Cruel Words'll Leave This Tyrant Baffled! Cuz Ever Since My Mood Heard This Shy Kid Battle
I Was Hoping He'd Cedar Light - Next To The Cooler Of Diet Snapple!
-LOL, Nice Closer......8/10

Overall:37/60
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Cee4:


Its time to off another fag,
Its a colostomy u had if u got it in the bag!, this Venom`s antidote causin repression
Yeah u off the top with no question, ur hairlines like the economy how its lost in recession!!
-LMAO! Nice Opener.....8/10
So fall back my friend
I ‘finish the prey’ someone call amen, shit lookin bare up stair like its already fall again
Enough mouth for a hall of men, fat lips aint dated Anniston but sure used to collagen!!
Ok....7/10
U cant breathe when u pout
Ducked Scott James ur too cheesy to bout, go catch aids since u want the ‘Eazy way out!’
Leavin no doubt, damn Illest found a homo, like David Carradine how ya ‘bound to no show!!‘
-Good Shyt, Feelin the "Eazy way out"....8/10
Get out the closet
Camel toe face, pussy breath, I’ll cut out Venom like a sushi chef!,..ur input spoils perfection
This princess gets loyal affection?, watch my punches ‘take out Lady Dy/Di‘ with a royal connection!!
-Nice.....8/10
Coz im…
Assigned to abuser her, u think `Jur ass sick?`…I say `Dyn a sore loser`, out my way im outstanding
U get no play no demanding, plus ya punches in the Hudson how u get away with forced landings!!
Decent.....7/10
Finish him!
49 verses failed against me, they take a strike fall and miss
I know ‘so shall/social Dynamiqs’ and I aint a psyc-hol-o-gist!!
Ok, nothing special.....6/10

Overall:44/60







V/Cee4

1-1

uppin for more votes.

dynamiq

It's Obvious Dude Can't Afford Grim When I Boost Ether
So 'C-Oughta Stay In His Place' - Before I 'Report Him To The Zoo Keeper!'
ok i like da nameplay i havent seen it before on him punch was nice 2 7/10



Top 10 On The Site? 'Not Jew!' - i've Yet To See This 'Pagan' Make It
Judging By the Threads He Post - Cee's Known To Talk Till Ya 'Blue In The Face Like A Skagen Bracelet!'
nice punch but kinda weak 6/10


So It's Odd To Think Cee Could Kill The Stage When On The Mic
Which 'Ghost To Show..You Have No Chance'..Nor 'Displays Of A Poltergeist'
kinda forced but decent punch 6/10
And..

Nvm What His Skill Portrays,I Figured Sluggish - Cuz If Cee Were To Build In Place To Linger Punches
Then We'd See A Show Of Hands!.. - And Children Plays With Finger Puppets!
Wat??? didnt like this at all weak 5/10


Cuz U Bringing Tough Talk Without Akward Muscle Is A Loss Earned Double!
Especially When Ya Past Verses Have So Much Senseless Name Plays - I Thought I Was Battling A Crossword Puzzle!
lol nice punch and shot at a personal 8/10
But See..

Cruel Words'll Leave This Tyrant Baffled! Cuz Ever Since My Mood Heard This Shy Kid Battle
I Was Hoping He'd Cedar Light - Next To The Cooler Of Diet Snapple!
lol liked this punch 2 nice closer 7/10

total 39/60

cee4

Its time to off another fag,
Its a colostomy u had if u got it in the bag!, this Venom`s antidote causin repression
Yeah u off the top with no question, ur hairlines like the economy how its lost in recession!!
lol u playn off dat video which is a lil unfair but its funny as shit 8/10
So fall back my friend
I ‘finish the prey’ someone call amen, shit lookin bare up stair like its already fall again
Enough mouth for a hall of men, fat lips aint dated Anniston but sure used to collagen!! (call a Jen)
lol liked dis punch but wasnt great 7/10
U cant breathe when u pout
Ducked Scott James ur too cheesy to bout, go catch aids since u want the ‘Eazy way out!’
Leavin no doubt, damn Illest found a homo, like David Carradine how ya ‘bound to no show!!‘
didnt like da change in ur set up kinda took away from ur flow but still a good punch 7/10
Get out the closet
Camel toe face, pussy breath, I’ll cut out Venom like a sushi chef!,..ur input spoils perfection
This princess gets loyal affection?, watch my punches ‘take out Lady Dy/Di‘ with a royal connection!!
nice flow but kinda weaker then the others 7/10
Coz im…
Assigned to abuser her, u think `Jur ass sick?`…I say `Dyn a sore loser`, out my way im outstanding
U get no play no demanding, plus ya punches in the Hudson how u get away with forced landings!!
like da name play even tho its a lil forced but punch was good 8/10
Finish him!
49 verses failed against me, they take a strike fall and miss
I know ‘so shall/social Dynamiqs’ and I aint a psyc-hol-o-gist!!
kinda hyped ur self up here didnt really punch just a lil name play so 6/10

total 43/60

vote cee4

great battle u guys

^i have a question for your vote. if you didnt get it why would you say weak to my line? its very easy to get unless your dumb.

anyway thanx for the vote = 2-1 cee4

Dynamiq


It's Obvious Dude Can't Afford Grim When I Boost Ether
So 'C-Oughta Stay In His Place' - Before I 'Report Him To The Zoo Keeper!'

Didnt sting, wasn't good imo 3/10


Top 10 On The Site? 'Not Jew!' - i've Yet To See This 'Pagan' Make It
Judging By the Threads He Post - Cee's Known To Talk Till Ya 'Blue In The Face Like A Skagen Bracelet!'

Wordplay was a LITTLE forced in the first line, but i see how you done it. Second bar was one of ur better ones, i'd rate it 6/10.


So It's Odd To Think Cee Could Kill The Stage When On The Mic
Which 'Ghost To Show..You Have No Chance'..Nor 'Displays Of A Poltergeist'

We'll i didnt like this bar either. The wordplay was good though
i'ma give this a 5/10

Nvm What His Skill Portrays,I Figured Sluggish - Cuz If Cee Were To Build In Place To Linger Punches
Then We'd See A Show Of Hands!.. - And Children Plays With Finger Puppets!

We'll wasn't really that good of a bar. But i get what you we're saying.
I'd rate this a 5/10

Cuz U Bringing Tough Talk Without Akward Muscle Is A Loss Earned Double!
Especially When Ya Past Verses Have So Much Senseless Name Plays - I Thought I Was Battling A Crossword Puzzle!

Lol one of ya better bars. The personal was nice, and so was the punch 7/10.

Cruel Words'll Leave This Tyrant Baffled! Cuz Ever Since My Mood Heard This Shy Kid Battle
I Was Hoping He'd Cedar Light - Next To The Cooler Of Diet Snapple!

nice wordplay, punch wasn't that bad either 7/10!

33/60



Cee4


Its time to off another fag,
Its a colostomy u had if u got it in the bag!, this Venom`s antidote causin repression
Yeah u off the top with no question, ur hairlines like the economy how its lost in recession!!

LOL!!!! this was sick and really funny, nice personal 9/10

So fall back my friend
I ‘finish the prey’ someone call amen, shit lookin bare up stair like its already fall again
Enough mouth for a hall of men, fat lips aint dated Anniston but sure used to collagen!! (call a Jen)

This was ok, nice wordplay though 6/10

U cant breathe when u pout
Ducked Scott James ur too cheesy to bout, go catch aids since u want the ‘Eazy way out!’
Leavin no doubt, damn Illest found a homo, like David Carradine how ya ‘bound to no show!!‘

Ehh, i personally didnt like this one i'll rate it 6/10

Get out the closet
Camel toe face, pussy breath, I’ll cut out Venom like a sushi chef!,..ur input spoils perfection
This princess gets loyal affection?, watch my punches ‘take out Lady Dy/Di‘ with a royal connection!!

Clever 7/10

Coz im…
Assigned to abuser her, u think `Jur ass sick?`…I say `Dyn a sore loser`, out my way im outstanding
U get no play no demanding, plus ya punches in the Hudson how u get away with forced landings!!

tight bar, a lil forced but still good. 7/10

Finish him!
49 verses failed against me, they take a strike fall and miss
I know ‘so shall/social Dynamiqs’ and I aint a psyc-hol-o-gist!!

Didn't sting but i got this bar 6/10

41/60

vote cee4

Good battle, sorry but cee4 just wins.

Dynamiq wrote:

Quick Update Man = 6 Bars Just Match What I Have

Yo..!

It's Obvious Dude Can't Afford Grim When I Boost Ether
So 'C-Oughta Stay In His Place' - Before I 'Report Him To The Zoo Keeper!'



..This Was Creative, i Never Seen This Concept Used On Cee Before, Extra Points On That, Everythin Was Nice `bout This Bar ..


Top 10 On The Site? 'Not Jew!' - i've Yet To See This 'Pagan' Make It
Judging By the Threads He Post - Cee's Known To Talk Till Ya 'Blue In The Face Like A Skagen Bracelet!'



^..Lol, This Was Sick, Nice Job On Both Lines ..


So It's Odd To Think Cee Could Kill The Stage When On The Mic
Which 'Ghost To Show..You Have No Chance'..Nor 'Displays Of A Poltergeist'

^.. I Thought Tha Wordplay in this Didn't Match Quite Exact, it Some What Took away From Tha Bar But, it Was Still a Koo Bar tho

And..

Nvm What His Skill Portrays,I Figured Sluggish - Cuz If Cee Were To Build In Place To Linger Punches
Then We'd See A Show Of Hands!.. - And Children Plays With Finger Puppets!

^.. Man, This Was a Stinger in Mah Eyes, it Was a Good Hit ..



Cuz U Bringing Tough Talk Without Akward Muscle Is A Loss Earned Double!
Especially When Ya Past Verses Have So Much Senseless Name Plays - I Thought I Was Battling A Crossword Puzzle!

^ ..Lol That Was Pretty Fuckin ill

But See..

Cruel Words'll Leave This Tyrant Baffled! Cuz Ever Since My Mood Heard This Shy Kid Battle
I Was Hoping He'd Cedar Light - Next To The Cooler Of Diet Snapple!

^ ..Koo Closer, Thought U Closed it a Lil Harder Than This tho

Like i Said Good Luck.

-- 30 Aug 2009 21:41 --

uppin for cee4...again.

Cee4 wrote:sorry man my bad. its been a crazy weekend haha. this is the first time ive been home since friday. i`ll edit this post with my 6 bars shortly.

VIDEO OF DYNAMIQ AKA JOEL VENOM

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Its time to off another fag,
Its a colostomy u had if u got it in the bag!, this Venom`s antidote causin repression
Yeah u off the top with no question, ur hairlines like the economy how its lost in recession!!

^ Comin Out Swingin ..Nice Punch
So fall back my friend
I ‘finish the prey’ someone call amen, shit lookin bare up stair like its already fall again
Enough mouth for a hall of men, fat lips aint dated Anniston but sure used to collagen!! (call a Jen)

^ ..Wasn't Feelin This Bar, i Thought it Had a Couple Of Played ass Concepts ..But! Tha Flow Was Flawless, i Loved That Part ..
U cant breathe when u pout
Ducked Scott James ur too cheesy to bout, go catch aids since u want the ‘Eazy way out!’
Leavin no doubt, damn Illest found a homo, like David Carradine how ya ‘bound to no show!!‘

^ ..Koo, Not Really a Hit, Cus He Really Hasn't No Showed ..So, This Bar Was iffy
Get out the closet
Camel toe face, pussy breath, I’ll cut out Venom like a sushi chef!,..ur input spoils perfection
This princess gets loyal affection?, watch my punches ‘take out Lady Dy/Di‘ with a royal connection!!

^.. I Liked tha First Line Better than tha Second Line, Tha Second Was Kinda ass Cus Tha Whole Set Up Wasn't Nice, Take Out Lady Dy? ..Wtf ..
Coz im…
Assigned to abuser her, u think `Jur ass sick?`…I say `Dyn a sore loser`, out my way im outstanding
U get no play no demanding, plus ya punches in the Hudson how u get away with forced landings!!

^ ..That First Line Wasn't Good, it Was Koo ..It Was a Played Concept Gone Wrong ..But Made Up For it in Tha Second Line, it Was Good ..
Finish him!
49 verses failed against me, they take a strike fall and miss
I know ‘so shall/social Dynamiqs’ and I aint a psyc-hol-o-gist!!

^ ..Nice Closer All around ..


Opener - Dyna Cus His Bar Was a lot More Creative ..
Punches - Dyna, Better Hits and Concepts
Wordplay - Tie, Dyna Creative & More Effective, But One Of Tha Set-Ups Were Some What Forced ..
Nameplay - Dyna ..Better Hits, & Creative Flips
Mutlies- Cee4, His Came Off Cleaner
Closer - Cee4 ..Killed With That Final Bar, it Was Sick .

Should be easy enough to get but..
Bar 2 - collagen injections give you Jay Z lips
Bar 3 - David Carradine = the dead guy from Kill Bill
Bar 4 - Lady Dy/Di = Princess Diana