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PTR FEAT SHARPTOOTH
Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 6:10 pm
by P.T.R-ins
bite on this
Re: PTR FEAT SHARPTOOTH
Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:56 pm
by TreTru
haha this shit is crazy..it's got a a play around vibe to it...
the first verse guy has decent mic presence..but theres some rhyme scheme ..trouble on it..
the hooks funny..lmao
the second verse starts aight but there's some grammar issues it sounds like a freestyle cuz it falls off lyrically more and more as it goes on..it's kinda simple even for a party fun type song..imo
umm the mixx is decent but the kicks might need a bit more bump..and the vocal quality sounds pretty crisp so that's a plus...
just keep workin on ya writing to help elevate yaself..1
Re: PTR FEAT SHARPTOOTH
Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 3:57 am
by Viral
this shit is alot better than that other track u dropped...million stvari er somethin...lol...the track to me is just funny...just the way u guys went about it...the beat was pretty nice...i think the whole beat could be brought up alot more along with the vocals....but overall pretty decent..keep doin ur thing
Re: PTR FEAT SHARPTOOTH
Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 9:32 pm
by P.T.R-ins
thanks for feeds.am gona
on it
Re: PTR FEAT SHARPTOOTH
Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 5:29 pm
by Kurse
I guess the best way to describe this track would be "interesting" lol
...the hook sounds like a couple of drunk dudes trying to sing to a bitch! haha It was entertaining. Though it was rediculously simple...it was catchy. Which again goes to show that sometimes the most simple things can start a fad!
First verse wasn't bad. But that second verse...
...wow.
Dude was all over the place. To be perfectly honest...he wasn't even making sense at certain parts. But I'm not going to go into details about all that. Listening to it should be self explainatory for everyone. lol
I give it a 5/10