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Lawgix wrote:just figured i'd drop somethin in here... cause its been a while so check it

just shit i wrote

i've been spittin it audio but let me convert it to text
word is a mess you herbs better expect this work to impress

Woah...dope line

i'm sure to progress this nervous infect sure to inject
venom like tention when i put this rope round ur neck

Decent.

to the nervous vets who claim their worthless checks
work?!? whats next? i'll be a wal mart greeter at 60 n be a nerdish pet

Decent

to these stupid common brats who put on a blue
vest and jet to the next aisle that hasn't been worked yet but i digress

Alright.

i'm slappin hoes into check rollin with sets not common to man
ur the type to start a fight n have 20 dudes in a van

That makes sense.

blindside me hit my blindspot with a fan its obvious
u can be a pussy and yet still act like a man!

Right.

what? ur tough cause u roll with the Klan? you tard!
i'll crucify your punk ass on the crucifix u burnt in my yard!

I like how the flow continued on that first bar.

you white supremisist bastards wearin a white night gown
your wives might frown from the fact i turned ur inards inside out

That is actually a clever rhyme.

hung u upside (down) from a branch knocked the lights right out
of the street so the cops couldn't see who let this pride fight out

First bar was dope, second was iffy.


let the blood gush down to ur head so ur head aches
impregnate ur daughter cause i said i'd fuck her till the bed breaks


Funny.

if the mother comes in and shes hot i'll fuck her too
i bet he didn't know this skinhead married into a family of Jews

Haha.

so who the fuck am i a white guy who might lie to get
on a cd with a nice guy charge him n fill him with white lies

It stays with the theme, I really liked where that bar was going and the end disappointed me a bit.

with the price this high we might sky rocket
into the night sky hit the airport n catch us a night flight to

LA with our disc n a gun walk into a station
n say spin this shit or its best to run

I'll say them two (four) bars go together really well, that is about it.

while my comrade has just fled out the door cause the
police have come tellin me to drop the weapon... u kiddin? this is fun!

step into the booth and take over the whole sessions
shoot like 4 dj's cause they were soothin their erections

Once again, some dope content, I'm not liking the end.

stop a fuckin track thats already in mid progression
get on the fuckin mic n just wreck it with no restin

Nah.

swat team baracades the door to smitherens
as i slaughter every one of em plus the captain with a guillotine

take off into the night like i'm a villian in a comic
if batman tracks me down i'm fillin him with vomit

Nah. That doesn't work for me.

went to 7-11 and held every fucker in there hostage
told em if they make sound their gettin shot n thats a promise

I like.

broke into a church as they were payin a dead man some homage
snuck into a confession booth and watched the preacher fuck an ostrich

Lol. I think the setup could have made a bit more sense for the ostrich line.

oh God not again look at this corny fucker Lawgix he can't rock it
i swear theres no stoppin me i'm too sick with it honest