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First Of The Last Freestyle

Posted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 2:39 pm
by Dead Silence
track done before "Goodbye To The Old Me"
it was my first one in like months

Re: First Of The Last Freestyle

Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 7:18 am
by Deciple
Its kinda slow and just keeps going and going.. long verses the the style of rap you throwing down.. and the hook sounds the same as the verses.. lyrically its ok. for the style of beat you should have mixed it up alittle. overall it was ok.

Re: First Of The Last Freestyle

Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 9:54 am
by Dead Silence
there was no hook lol

but like i said it was my first one in a while iw as rusty

Re: First Of The Last Freestyle

Posted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 3:50 pm
by TheBigHurt~
the beats pretty cool and you did alright on it though id think about going back and maby changing your voice up a lil in it keep droppin

Re: First Of The Last Freestyle

Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 2:07 pm
by Riggz
LMFAO!!!!!!!!!