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5 Bars house rules, no biting, feeding, swaying etc


good luck, fuck a check-in, just drop a verse!

-- Sat Aug 15, 2009 3:02 am --

sUP Dunny



g'luck

you battled good cats?? pfft well yah Missed the Ringer, shit Quix a Thinker!
wid Piff, tah sink herbz! so watch me 'Finish Scotch off' like Whisky Drinkers
Dog i told you.... your not Winning this, Well maybe your crazy, but your a BAby as well!
kill you, have you sitting in Hell then 'Treat you tah water n seafood' till your Swimming in Shellz
your Whack i'm Brilliant, why the Fuck are you EVEN-TALKING; you should be Leaving Promptley!
So listen .... yah ain;t a Thug or G' and 'Cant stand up to me' like Stephan Hawking!
Stop dreaming! your not in contention, YOU ain't nice wid dah truth only nice wid Deception!
as for whos winning this battle?? i wouldn't 'Banq-uet(wid)-Hall' like wedding Receptions
i'm a bang yah surface like a Freaky Drummer, til you feeling dah heat like 90 degrees of Summer!
i succed wid women kid, so I Can't 'See you winning this' i guess call me Stevie Wonder!

aigh 1

i Will Edit My Verse into This Post When i Finish it, i Have a Bit Of a Hangover Still Lol.

Aright Let's Go.


i Show a Limit-With-My-Patience-When-Burnin-Dudes ..||
'Get at Me Yah Dig' Sounds Like a Written-invitation-To-Bury-u ..||*
u Suck Against Vets, i Know This Wack-Job-is-Fearing-This ..||
Cause He's 'Soft And Goes Down Fast' Like Cocks With Lack-Of-Experience ..||
Alright Rakim Jr, u Can Take a Phrase That's Rare When Writing-a-Rap ..||
But it's Only a 'Daily Word' in Classes Where They Still Get Time-For-a-Nap ..||**
u Ain't a Serious Contender Bitch, Lookin For Veterans-To-Diss ..||
The Only Reason ur Here's To Make ScottJames Look Better-Than-He-is ! ..||
'X at The End Of ur Name' Like Any School Paper On This Clown's-Record ..||
Fuck 'Stopping His Train Of Thought', This Dumbass Wasn't Even Allowed-Aboard ! ..||***


*Check His Sig.
**'i Can Take a Phrase That's Rarely Heard, Flip it Now it's a Daily Word' - Rakim.
***Train Of Thought's His Old Crew.

I liked both of the verse's.
Quix - you came hard, Lyrics were dope, Punchlines were nice, Good attacks, over all good.

Scotch - I liked how you wrote yours out, Like it to me was easier to read out and get what you were saying. Lyrics were kinda mediocre compared to Quix. But still Good.

Imma have to give this one tho to Quix. it is a battle and just cuz you like a certain style you can overlook everything else..

lol i give a half vote to both cause both where stressed and wack...... shold have more of a smooth flow to them lol if it counts on my vote somebody pick up my half of vote and make it a whole because i think its a tie for as far as talent

Punches - Dom
Wordplay - Dom
Nameplay - Quix
Flow - Both
Multis - Both
Disses - Dom
"Daamns"- Quix
Complexity - Dom

Overall - Dom.

Lol @ 'Daamns'

punches - scotch
wordplay - scotch
nameplay - quix
flow - both
multis - both
complexity - scotch
entertainmet - quix

overall - scotch

Punches - Scotch
Wordplay - Scotch
Name play - Quix
Flow - Scotch
Multis - Quix
Complexity - Scotch
Entertainment - Quix

Overall = scotch

3-1

Bump u Dicks. (Thanks For The Votes So Far).

Quix:

you battled good cats?? pfft well yah Missed the Ringer, shit Quix a Thinker!
wid Piff, tah sink herbz! so watch me 'Finish Scotch off' like Whisky Drinkers
-Nice Opener 8/10
Dog i told you.... your not Winning this, Well maybe your crazy, but your a BAby as well!
kill you, have you sitting in Hell then 'Treat you tah water n seafood' till your Swimming in Shellz
-Not really feelin it 5/10
your Whack i'm Brilliant, why the Fuck are you EVEN-TALKING; you should be Leaving Promptley!
So listen .... yah ain;t a Thug or G' and 'Cant stand up to me' like Stephan Hawking!
-Ok Line 7/10
Stop dreaming! your not in contention, YOU ain't nice wid dah truth only nice wid Deception!
as for whos winning this battle?? i wouldn't 'Banq-uet(wid)-Hall' like wedding Receptions
-Nice Wordplay, Punch Hit as Well 9/10
i'm a bang yah surface like a Freaky Drummer, til you feeling dah heat like 90 degrees of Summer!
i succed wid women kid, so I Can't 'See you winning this' i guess call me Stevie Wonder!
-Ok Closer 6/10


Overall:35/50
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Scotch Hall:

i Show a Limit-With-My-Patience-When-Burnin-Dudes ..||
'Get at Me Yah Dig' Sounds Like a Written-invitation-To-Bury-u ..||
-Nice Opener 7/10
u Suck Against Vets, i Know This Wack-Job-is-Fearing-This ..||
Cause He's 'Soft And Goes Down Fast' Like Cocks With Lack-Of-Experience ..||
-Funny Line. Decent 7/10
Alright Rakim Jr, u Can Take a Phrase That's Rare When Writing-a-Rap ..||
But it's Only a 'Daily Word' in Classes Where They Still Get Time-For-a-Nap ..||
-Na 5/10
u Ain't a Serious Contender Bitch, Lookin For Veterans-To-Diss ..||
The Only Reason ur Here's To Make ScottJames Look Better-Than-He-is ! ..||
-Nice. I like that 9/10
'X at The End Of ur Name' Like Any School Paper On This Clown's-Record ..||
Fuck 'Stopping His Train Of Thought', This Dumbass Wasn't Even Allowed-Aboard ! ..||
-Really didn't hit for me. Weak Closer 5/10


Overall:33/50
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Damn! this was definitly a close one. Both came hard and delivered nice verses Scotch had a smooth vetran type swag to his and everything came together nicely but in some parts the lines just weren't that hard to me. Quix's verse also flowed nice and it just had alittle for fire to it. Good Shyt from both no dought.



V/Quix

3-2...shitz heating up!! lol

Punches=Scotch
Wordplay=Scotch
Name play=Quix
Flow=Scotch
Multis=Scotch
Complexity=Scotch
Entertainment=Quix

My Vote Goes To Scotch

quix was in this battle like Scotch told

u Suck Against Vets, i Know This Wack-Job-is-Fearing-This ..||
Cause He's 'Soft And Goes Down Fast' Like Cocks With Lack-Of-Experience ..

Name play-quix

Flow-Scotch
Multies-Scotch
Punches-Scotch
Wordplay-Scotch

and Scotchs drop was much more easier to read,,without that DAH,MUH,PFFt craps

VOTE Scotch definitly

Word, Thanks Voters, Good Battle Quix.

5-2 Closed & Updated.

-- Fri Aug 28, 2009 4:48 am --

k Looks Like ive Not Closed a Thread Or Updated a Record Since The Site's Makeover. i Managed To Update My Wins, But Quix Still Needs a Loss Added And This Still Needs To Be Closed So Yeah Either Someone Tell Me How Or Do it For Me.

-- Fri Aug 28, 2009 4:53 am --

Ok Fyi Guys i Found Out How So No Worries.