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This is my check in...I'll drop tomorrow if I get a chance..if not for sure on Monday...if that's a problem then I'm out.

You got 48 hours to drop.

Starting in 5 hours.

check...

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Plex sorry this site battle didn't go thru. There is alot of dickriders n' hate votes. Maybe some other day we can do this again.

I got rid of your hype line to save from Dq.

it wasn't that good anyway. Don't worry ;]

Precise you better hurry with that verse.

Uppin for precises verse

i bring more "swisha's" then paul-wall ill gitcha all stalled its a shame-stop//
bring the skill like micheal-jordan while you recycle-more-spam so i take AIM cause you lack "game-dog"//
(swisha in basketball, or swisha house.. gamedog = his AIM screen name)

fuck punches ill "drop-kicks" like hulk hogan, unknowin, youre untalented yet flaunt-spits//
ive read your topics in tony jaas-lists and the way you draw-spits is funnier then micheal neno's comics//

how fitting you named yourself neno you felt-it-right and earned-a-loss//
cause "micheal neno's" two top series were the get-a-lifes and eternal-flaws//

rap nation seems more like a wack suburb so listen as i attack some herb//
pack enough heat to leave him sunburned, or i could spam jack nicholson pictures.. whats worse?//

you spit with sad-little-schemes imagining-these raps-that-i-sneeze prove this dumb-kid-spits-soft//
this battle will prove drastically, that graphically, youre just a one-trick-ripoff//
(one trick ripoff is a graphic novel by micheal neno)

im gonna fit this kid with cement-shoes hes meant-to-lose, im frying-neno//
he'll "swim with the fishes" its said-as-truth, cause hell plummet deeper then where there findin-nemo//

sorry, i had this written yesterday and forgot to post

Thanks for dropping Precise...A little advice...when you do a text battle against someone make sure you got personals that everybody is familiar with. You coming with some novel author named Micheal Neno...who the hell is that..if people don't get it, they wont' vote for you. STAY AWAY FROM PLAYED NAME FLIPS, OR PERSONAL. Try to come up with something different. I've been battling for years and you think I haven't heard the finding Nemo line, the El Nino line, the stereo types about asians? I've heard them all and so have the people that read the battles. So you can guess they are not going to find it nice after the umpteen time they've seen it. If you come up with personals n' name flips that people haven't seen that would give your drop the creativity edge and your punches could land a little harder. Just some advice to better your texting skills, you can take it or leave it, I just want to see you elevating that's all. Oh by the way....upping for votes!!

Ok why are you explaining? about the played out lines like you are trying to get votes fucking retard shut your trap and just wait for votes

Go suck some dicks for some kool aid points conspiracy. You fucking african baboon.

Well that was verry original..... "African baboon" how lame moronic nor am i close to being an african or a baboon stupid ass it's funny how it offended you of what i said that you are trying to make you verse look good by degrading his by saying that you've heard the lines many times well we have so we don't give a fuck

You stupid fuck, I'm giving him that advice for him to better his text art...I don't need to make myself seem like I'm better cause I just proved that with my drop. This is the last time I'm responding to you. So go fuck off n' find a different hobby or something.

Aw did i hurt you feelings soft ass? its ok we all know what your intentions was about "The played out lines" because only you would know about that moron its you're like one of the fragile queers with a soft chest