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heres my check-in, this is Tuxx. Yo Complex, drop ya shit so we can get this poppin' playa. Rapnation is bout to teach yall how to rap.

two broken rules - no more warnings.

u can't match-this-flow, I'm going to 'bury tux', and leave his casket-closed ||
hitting em with drastic-blows, claiming he is undefeated is like saying Nash-Is-Slow ||

try spitting with innovation, these kids are just a bunch of locals ||
nobodies in-to-nation (intonation), like they can't check their vocals ||

dawg.we know the facts, u pm all ur friends asking them will you vote-for-me ||
ur whole entire faction, is full of herbs like potpourri ||

u smoke a lot of crack, but this is the first time you seen-a-burner ||
I know for a fact, you've never been beat like tina-turner ||

its genesis on my premise the arch nemesis, here to end this ||
battling me is senseless, ill take over the nation like a supremacist ||

I'm wild-son, this childs-done, de-feet will burn worst then a mile-run ||
and ur profiles-dumb, ur suppose to name ur favorite rappers, not the ones you stole ur style-from ||

now the denial-comes..see the signs, you choose to use the same approach every-time ||
thats probably why when you recycle lines, is the only time you drop a heavy-rhyme ||

like the news on the Iraq-War you need to hop off the nuts of War-BuX ||
then again what the fuck tux, idealize his audio cuz yourz-sucks ||

Listen boy,
The flows colder than winter when it get ya heart to stop
n' I'ma show you a winner cuz X marks the spot/
Yo we free the mean bars for them other cats hatin'
so you suckas need a green-card to come to Rapnation/
I hustle fast pace wit more pounds than a elephant
n' now I own "Complex-City" like a housin' development/
I'm a city-boy n' you should check the roots
cuz you can be a pretty-boy until I X-a-cute/
Yea the Tecs are shootin' when I execute
Plex is stupid, you couldn't kick ass wit an extra boot/
I text the truth n' its known to get naughty
so if you ever burry Tuxx it'll be over my dead body/
cuz this is my hobby n you can spit ya game for days
but every line that you say about my name is played/
as if it was a "NO" from David Spade
kid I'm sicker wit the flow than a case of AIDS/
n' the dangers raisin' so we must be in war
n' I'm like a retired whore, I don't give a fuck anymore/

wordplay - x-acute
personals - complex
punchlines - complex
vocab - complex
metas-similies - x-acute
creativity - x-acute
multis - complex

vote- complex

Good battle , it was pretty close though.

"so if you ever burry Tuxx it'll be over my dead body"...do i sense feeding or flipping.. hmm.. i'll call it a coincidence for now lol

hey i was saving that till he calls me a d/r

let me explain, yall should know exactly what I mean too. The whole point of that line n' the 2 lines after that was because I knew for a fact that he was gonna say some played ass line about a tux that i already heard a thousand times.....feel me?

The more that I look at it though it does look like I flipped, n' I knew this was gonna happen as soon as the idea for that line popped into my head...lol....but anyway, I don't give a fuck....

Nevermind

hes not a contestant

If i was a contestant....baaaaad things would happen.

Subsist wrote:If i was a contestant....baaaaad things would happen.

yeah u would cry....lol wee allll kno dat....so im guessin votin is happenin then?...even tho DQ was announced already?

YAh... ^