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[Phasewon]
I raise mayhem; when I assault and beat your corpse,
Spark a tiki tortch, talk to ouija boards, and praise Satan
Take patience, stay in your place, or I'll break your face in
Eight places, and slam you so hard that it breaks the pavement
Better have some medical plans; when I mangle you,
Have you strangled and hang you by your intestinal strands
I'm fore warning yall/ ... I need an excuse
To tie this noose around your neck, and toss you off of the roof
And if it's loose, then you still got a four story fall
With red spatters, on the cement, when your head splatters
Every where I go, I leave a trail of dead rappers
Hear the Devil's messages when my record is sped backwards
Make you say my name, while I drain your main vein
With a razor blade stained with aids, 'til your brain aches in pain
Chain you from your ankles, have your throat strangled
Drive a steak through your heart, and break you apart, from both angles
Straight from the start; the most painful part's when your toes dangle
Shank you with razor sharp blades that are state of the art
Playin' a part in the six sequences of death
Step one- seep his breath, so it aint leakin' out his chest
Step two- cover the basement with plastic, placed on the rug
So when you cut his face with the hatchet, there aint a trace of his blood
Phase three is his life flashin' in fast foward
While the hack saw, wacks his neck, 'til his head's half off
Part four's a crash course, chop off his hands and feet
Disconnect his jaw, slit his neck and all, snatch his teeth
And proceed to slice his body with a sword
So they can't I.D. his corpse, from the autopsy at the morgue
Chapter five, a lateral pull will shatter his skull
Batter a hole in his chest, reach in and capture his soul
And lesson six, after you slice and dice
Sell his soul to the Devil and sacrifice his life to Christ
For twice the price, a perfect murder... vanish without a trace
Off the face of the planet, the jakes aint searchin' further
Burst the burner, I'm sparkin' if often... burstin it first
The worst of the worst, I'm a demon surfaced to earth
A walkin' abortion... at birth I was cursed
Driving to church in a hearse, to drop your body off in a coffin
I'm halocausted with sin; I'm Lucifer's kid
With a crucifix pinned, to my ribs, and a cross drawn on my skin

Very nice shit. Grotesque but still entertaining lol. Some good imagery, very horror-core sounding. Had the hint of Eminem to it. Definitely a little different from some of the stuff you've dropped before. Good to see a little versatility. I enjoyed your past drops more than this one, but some of the rhyme schemes in here were nice as hell. Flow was flawless. Nice piece. As soon as I started reading it, I pictured this song spit over D12's American Psycho beat. Very well suited.

definitly a ill drop. i was thinkin tha same thing wit tha american pyscho shit

The creativity was off the wall. I thought I was just going to quote the first half, but then I read it again and the steps were probably the best part.

Flow was excellent. I can't see one flaw in the piece.

it Started Off Slow To Me Compared To ur Usual Stuff The Flow Was a Bit Jerky. Other Than That it Had Some Really Big Eminem influence in There, Not Just The Subject Matter But The Way it Was Presented.

Chain you from your ankles, have your throat strangled
Drive a steak through your heart, and break you apart, from both angles

And proceed to slice his body with a sword
So they can't I.D. his corpse, from the autopsy at the morgue

And lesson six, after you slice and dice
Sell his soul to the Devil and sacrifice his life to Christ
For twice the price, a perfect murder... vanish without a trace
Off the face of the planet, the jakes aint searchin' further
Burst the burner, I'm sparkin' if often... burstin it first
The worst of the worst, I'm a demon surfaced to earth
A walkin' abortion... at birth I was cursed

^All Those Parts Are Examples Of What i Said.

The Subject is Pretty Played But u Were Creative With it And Didn't Go Cliche Which is an Easy Trap To Fall into. Rhymeschemes Were ill as Usual That's Probably ur Strongest Point in My Opinion. Not ur Best But i Enjoyed it.

mucho respect for the feedback, yall.

Every where I go, I leave a trail of dead rappers
Hear the Devil's messages when my record is sped backwards

my fav line...good shit mang!

Yo .. You Should Tell Whoever you Took This Piece From That i Wanna Collab LoL

^ lol

Preface the drop by saying that its on 6 different sites going back as far as 2006.