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Due Date: 8/5/09 but you can post before

*MenaCe #2 Ranked In Battle Leauge Will Be Put To The Test This Week Against SacredVerse Whose Debut Battle On Illest In The Battle League!! Anything Can Happen In This One Lets See How MenaCe Can Fair Against An Unknown Opponent.*

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Listen!



Pound for Pound this clown aint found in my Weight Class..
Plenty "Shots" got em goin down fast like a Chase Glass!!..

Not a Line you produce is the truth nor is it New Sickness..
You win This? Shit i'll even chose to lose an just Do Different!!..

Im to wicked and you proceed to be still so Suddle and Timid..
I aint Humble to Bitches and this "pussys" nap sacks packed wit a Bundle Of Kittens!!..

Fuck Raps infact he's an impared square tryin to Invade a Circle..
You rap tough but this battles been wrapped up like an Aids Commercial!!..

There's nothin sacred bout this basic fake bitch that was Stored in the Basement..
You were "Never There" like what a high school drop out Scored On There Placements!!..

So for "SV" to test me imma make today feel like its Twenty Twelve..
Have him incinerate on to my dinner plate droppin consistant like when Money Melts!!..

Mic check...

Verse known to blaze them veteran rappers, Killah, why not pair me against a decent Opponent/
Dude aint better than average, loves it when "Men slip the Ace in his Hole", squirms and Holds It/

Clenchin the shitter like when his mom gave birth, and tried to pass him off to his fuckin Babysitter/
Cuz the only time you been blazin hot was when ya moms tried cookin you in the baby Incubator/

Verses so potent its showin the true colors of these rappers, stop trying to jump on the "Sac", Bitch!/
Cuz merkin all these "Men is" like finger fuckin his mom, an easy "Four Fit", the twinkies poke this fat Kid!/

But don't get me wrong, I gave you a chance, went through ya battles lookin to see what you packin, Lass/
Now I gotta send these punches to ya dome, and leave proof on ya face like you been sleepin in Class!/ Ever fall asleep in class? you know!

Don't claim killa status, you got less than twice ya whoopings in ya record, hows that hit Home?/
Merkin me, pfft, bitch please, get off both knees and stop takin shots to the face and keep em on ya flip Phone/

Bet this kid gone get pissed when my missiles hit and lift em, gonna run to the crew and put a price on my ass, Kids/
Only time this bitch rolls in the the grocer's market, looks at the "cabbage" wishin all his "cred isn't on Plastic!"/

Eh, I'm loosin it... Uppin on votes

Uppin!

Uppin 4 Some Fuckin Votes!

Vote: Menace Barely

Every thing was a Tie Except

Flow:MenaCe

Multi:Sacred Verse

Enjoyment:Menace

Nameplay/Personals:Sacred Verse

Punches:Menace

Brief:Sacred Verse Has Skills Its Just That His Punches Werent As Appealing As Menaces. Usually With The Long Bar Style U Pack n Multis n Setup For a BIG PUNCH the multis were there but the punches were love taps

1-0 Uppin!

Menace got this one... the first 2 lines were nice and the bundle of kittens line was dope too.. Sacred was nice 2 but Menace gets my vote =)

2-0?

Not trying to void ya vote, but could you do the cats please? Just so I know what to work on?

close this...

menace is still not even as good as he should be, he's literate enough its just i dont believe his first line has much relevance to his second line, no connection ya dig? but sacred looks like he has mad potential its just that ur multis are only endrhymes and ur flow is sooo fuckin dragged man, so work on that structure dawg.

punches - tie
multis - menace
nameplay - sacredverse
personals - sacredverse
flow - menace
enjoyment - menace..barely

vote - menace

id like to see u keep it up sacred, id like to battle u sometime

3-0 KO

Close This Killah!

Hmmm, a battleboard that doesn't value punches... No swaying, just saying now that all the votes have been cast. Anyway, I also need someone to close my fuckin battle with Quix.