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Due Date: 8/5/09 but you can post before


*Quix The Illest Veteran Will Be Making His Debut On BL Against One Of Illest's Newcomers Tellavasion. This Should Be A Good Test For Tellavasion And A Good Look For All Others To See How Dominant Quix Will Be In The League. Battle Fans Get Ready This Should Be a Good One.*

*check*

btw how many bars?

check....i'm down fo Whtevea!

how 8 bars 16 lines sound?

-- Tue Aug 04, 2009 10:25 pm --

nvmd disregard the above post 12 lines im posting now...

never been into arcades, so Quix this isn't a game
fuck what you think, kid i'll stick my dick in ya brain
punchline king? ha ya hits barely damage'n
weaker than Vader when he was Anakin....ya lack the Force
plus ya threads wouldn't be felt in a Fabric store
while my punches bless'd like blows from a nun
so when i rock ya world im toss'n stones from the sun
"Quix the illest vet" he ain't live'n up to expectations
the truth is ya verse's nothing without the explainations
and im not saying this, just to make quit
but it been so long over the fat lady released her greatest hits

-- Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:06 am --

dawg you missed the deadline...

Wut up Illest Battle League??

sorry was madd busy hommie!

but hur'goes

you shouldn't have even Talked-to-me Fam; your a Reject, i won't except your apologies, damn!
murder this dude? yes i probably can, but instead i'll have 'Tele-Scoped' like Astrology fanz
you roll wid cabbage patch dolls and bubble gum ... i'm fuckin wid Hammerz and laserz!
tah leave you deceased fast cuz this puusy 'Seem Trash' like Amateur Tailors
i'LL fuckin Pop yah dome, then Copp yah Carrotz! i'm brilliant wid keyz; my Dropz they cherish!
I BANG harder than Drums Do' ... so i'm a fuckin 'Son dude' like Foster Parents
I'm a beast wid dah heat and vocab, Retreat you geek cuz i'll leave you Diceased you know that!
yah Decieving dah known Catz .. cuz on Illest 'you look out of place' like punjabi's wid no cabz

that’s all dah time I had!! Good luck!

Tellavasion:

never been into arcades, so Quix this isn't a game
fuck what you think, kid i'll stick my dick in ya brain
-LOL Funny opener 6/10
punchline king? ha ya hits barely damage'n
weaker than Vader when he was Anakin....ya lack the Force
plus ya threads wouldn't be felt in a Fabric store
-Nice 8/10
while my punches bless'd like blows from a nun
so when i rock ya world im toss'n stones from the sun
-Ok 6/10
"Quix the illest vet" he ain't live'n up to expectations
the truth is ya verse's nothing without the explainations
-Nice Line 8/10
and im not saying this, just to make quit
but it been so long over the fat lady released her greatest hits
-Weak Closer 4/10


Overall:32/50


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Quix

you shouldn't have even Talked-to-me Fam; your a Reject, i won't except your apologies, damn!
murder this dude? yes i probably can, but instead i'll have 'Tele-Scoped' like Astrology fanz
-Sick Opener 10/10
you roll wid cabbage patch dolls and bubble gum ... i'm fuckin wid Hammerz and laserz!
tah leave you deceased fast cuz this puusy 'Seem Trash' like Amateur Tailors
-Nice 8/10
i'LL fuckin Pop yah dome, then Copp yah Carrotz! i'm brilliant wid keyz; my Dropz they cherish!
I BANG harder than Drums Do' ... so i'm a fuckin 'Son dude' like Foster Parents
-Solid Punch 9/10
I'm a beast wid dah heat and vocab, Retreat you geek cuz i'll leave you Diceased you know that!
yah Decieving dah known Catz .. cuz on Illest 'you look out of place' like punjabi's wid no cabz
-Ok Closer 7/10


Overall:34/40

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Ok this was a good one and even tho quix only dropped 4 barz he still just had more direct and hard hittin punches, tv you came nice just not as nice as quix



V/Quix

1-0 Q

I'll drop a vote on this once Quix drop a verse! Look for the edit!

ok ^

ill quix, this is the best four bars ive seen from ya nigga lol

the telescope line was something i wouldve said too lol real ish
tellevision got catswept on this one man

lol at "copp ya carrots" shit had me laughin a bit

2-0 aha

THANKS DUDE ^^

Vote-telle idk just felt the flow better.....nuff said

2-1 Quix

quix took it no need for a break down its an ez decision in my eyes

I vote Quix His verse was more advanced he took it in nameplay personals multis and his delivery was harder telle came nice but not nice enough


4-1 TKO Quix -Closed n Updated-