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STANDARD RULES.

Lets say 5 tah 6 barz ... drop Asap!

Check!..

ok ... cheque































Aigh, 5 barz kid!

I'm a be discreet and Beat this Joker Man, Release dah heat and Scope your Plans!
have you Croke or Damned! cuz i'm have 'Ace ate(8)' like Decent Poker Hands (Ace and an
i aim for the top, but even Higherz Good ... i'll bust wid dah action clipz
Relax and sit, or i'll have your 'Children Born into problems' like Micheal Jacksons Kids
your a joke, just some Average Barz, i'd beat you senseless if we had tah Spar!
just ask dah Stars! i'm a 'break up and smoke this herb' fatser than his Avatar
ILLEST MINDS your crew? your Describing MY Team! your trash, whack and garbage i ain't Sympathizing wid fiegns
Illest minds?? lmfaaaao! sure kid ...I'm a have your 'Clique on the flat line' Like minimizing your screen (self expliand)
I'm a do you like Thanksgiving n Carv yah Scriptz, have you in Scarz when i Discharge dah Clip
straight Target Kid; cuz we've only ever seen 'Menace wid A phantom' when talking Star war Flicks (Star wars 1 "the Phantom menace)

Applause….as they nail his coffin closed! Funeral march out of the church!!! lolol

My Badd bout the wait, my internet was down for a week...


Anywayz, Listen!




With the quikness i can have quix removed from Existance..
Punches Inflicted to leave em "Cut Off" like the Tongue of a Witness!!..

What is this kid isane? tryin to spark shit and Rekindle Flame..
Snap his brittle frame then "U" d "I" e when inside like ya Middle Name!!..

Tryin to be consistant when he spits shit but its still Not Impressive..
Im a herb?,It might seem like your visine and your "Drops" cant Stop the Redness!!..

Trust I Climb so high on cloud nine shittin all over his Point of View..
Wit my demeanor like Katrinas leavin you with no Choice to Move!!..Ya Stuck Bitch!

Your whole style's cliche screenplayed like a Broadway Musical..
I'm a Avarage Joe wit Disastrous Blows that All Say your Losin To..!!

it was close but over all with the most punches menace got it and with the most name play quix got it............soooooooooooooooooooo i gotta vote for quix

dont really like u but on here u respect the flow
both verses were wack tho lol voteup!!!!

1-0 Uppin!

Punches-Menace
Multie's-N/A
Creativity-Tie
Nameplay-Neither
Wordplay-Neither
Consistancy-Quix
Flow-Menace
Enjoyment-Menace

Vote- Menace

1-1 Up!

both shoulda came a lot harder but quix gets my vote

2-1 Uppin!

Everything is a tie except


Multis:Quix

Flow:Menace

Personals:Quix


Vote:Quix

3-1 Q

With the quikness i can have quix removed from Existance..
Punches Inflicted to leave em "Cut Off" like the Tongue of a Witness!!..
i get it, but its not a hard punch 5/10
What is this kid isane? tryin to spark shit and Rekindle Flame..
Snap his brittle frame then "U" d "I" e when inside like ya Middle Name!!..
no...forced as fuck nameplay 3/10
Tryin to be consistant when he spits shit but its still Not Impressive..
Im a herb?,It might seem like your visine and your "Drops" cant Stop the Redness!!..
how does his drops being red have anything to do with u being called an herb? 4/10
Trust I Climb so high on cloud nine shittin all over his Point of View..
Wit my demeanor like Katrinas leavin you with no Choice to Move!!..Ya Stuck Bitch!
ok i guess it makes more sense, u have so much filler tho man u gotta work on building the punch the whole time...5/10
Your whole style's cliche screenplayed like a Broadway Musical..
I'm a Avarage Joe wit Disastrous Blows that All Say your Losin To..!!
good closer better than the rest, the last line was decent. 7/10

24/50


I'm a be discreet and Beat this Joker Man, Release dah heat and Scope your Plans!
have you Croke or Damned! cuz i'm have 'Ace ate(8)' like Decent Poker Hands (Ace and an 8 )
it makes sense wordplay wise, but not literately. good opener 7/10
i aim for the top, but even Higherz Good ... i'll bust wid dah action clipz
Relax and sit, or i'll have your 'Children Born into problems' like Micheal Jacksons Kids
first part major filler, but great punch, mj lines are played but this was fresh tho 8/10
your a joke, just some Average Barz, i'd beat you senseless if we had tah Spar!
just ask dah Stars! i'm a 'break up and smoke this herb' fatser than his Avatar
so so this time u fell off a bit, 5/10
ILLEST MINDS your crew? your Describing MY Team! your trash, whack and garbage i ain't Sympathizing wid fiegns
Illest minds?? lmfaaaao! sure kid ...I'm a have your 'Clique on the flat line' Like minimizing your screen (self expliand)
that flat line punch is waay played dammn, lol 4/10 for also repeatin "illest minds?" in the same bar to start each line, shittt
I'm a do you like Thanksgiving n Carv yah Scriptz, have you in Scarz when i Discharge dah Clip
straight Target Kid; cuz we've only ever seen 'Menace wid A phantom' when talking Star war Flicks (Star wars 1 "the Phantom menace)
flow was fuckin off here, and the multis didnt match, star wars flick and target kid, and discharge the clip dont rhyme much buddy 4/10 poor closer 28/50

quix wins this

4-1 Q

is that a win?

4-1 TKO QUIX -Closed n Updated-