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This is Jahai's Song Addicted to the Word and its story is tight and i am blessed to be able to share a part of what i got in the 2nd verse. I sing it like a NA Meeting so you all check it out and let me know how i did.

this is was aight man... i dont know i was really feelin it tho. flow was kinda choppy for both of you. lyrics were there mos def, the story and message was ok in some parts and ill in others. i dont really believe in religion so its hard for me to bump somethin thats tellin me "jesus is the way" but it was aight, i think if yall took more time to make the flow smoother it would be one hell of a song for yall!!!!

props and keep em comin....

ditto the track was cool, but flows were on and off...as mention the lyrics was definitely hot. I wont knock yall on the jesus thing though...i fux with some christian rap and i fell yall had a clear message and good story in this track....that's what's sup...keep dropping though return the feed and know you'll always get a response back from me...