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Don't Mean To Sound Harsh...But You "Subsist" On "Unimaginitive-Rhymes" //
Did You Join This Site Lookin For a Rep? "Son-You're-Wack-Why-Waste-Kids'-Time?"//

There's No Skill To Ya Lyrics~i Read it Thinkin it Was a Joke "Thinkin-it's-Funny" //
Faggit You Had More Men Up Your ass Than a "Ventriliquist-Dummy" //

i Joined This Site To Raise My Skill~and "Write-And-Share-With-Rappers" //
But Here i Find Myself Keystyling George "Michael's-Anal-Packer" //

i'd Hate To Get Too Personal, You'd Cry To Your Mom Who's Also Your "Sister" //
i'm Spittin Fire in all Directions~in This inferno i DOUBT You'd Be The "Subsister" //

That Was My Weakest Line Of This Battle, Coz i Rhymed "Sister With Sister" //
But Mister, Get This Picture, My Weakest Shit Would Blister and Waste No Lines Before it "Ripped-Ya" //

in This Game We're All Animals, But i Remain Top Of The Food Chain, I Could "Diss-You-All-Day" //
i'm Verbally Dissconecting "Ya-Vertabrae-From-Ya-Brain"-Like a "Dis-Conjoined-Train" //

as a "Matter-Of-Fact"-"I'll-Scatter-Your-Pack"-in a "Rabid-Attack"-Till You're incapapble Of "Battling-Back" //
Lyrically i'll "Ravage-Ya-"SMACK"--1 Tyson KO Punchline From Domino And You'll Be "Flat-On-Ya-Back" //

Choosing a Battle On This Site, i Clearly Chose The "Joker"--The Usleless "Card-in-a-Stack" //
You Think You're "Going-Places"-You're Getting Nowhere Like You're On a Treadmill..Still "Crap-at-The-Back" //

You ain't Evelating, Sorry, You're "Stuck in The Pits" Like "Cheap-Deoderant" //
Don't You See How Much u Suck...Obviously Not Coz You Wouldn't Have "Keep-Goin-With-it" //

You're Clearly Finished *Smirks*, This is a Verbal Heist Now "Drop-The-Moolah" //
Stay Keystyling And Watch Me Take "Quantinum Leaps" Like "Scott Bakula" // (Scott Bakula = Guy From The Quantinum Leap Show)

10 Bars..Heh

nice

nice verse

last thing-i-know , im bein challeneged by domino ,//
so i sit-n-go , spit-n-flow , till i make sure Ive done-this-hoe.//

I dont-know what's wacker , domino "smokin a cracker"// (check his profile "Do you smoke?Crackers")
or the idea that this kid'll grow up to be a rapper//

the shit i'll tell , feels like going through hell//
you came here to excell?, you dont even know how to spell!//

kid feels im wastin his time , half his shit just dont rhyme //
now i just feel inclined , to turn this dumb bitch blind//

your rhymes blister , cause my shit's sinister , //
im rippin money off your sister , like she's a cash register//

i cannibalize the heart of my victims as my main course//
cause they capitalise the start of every word in their verse// (he does that)

my rhymes'll pierce black holes , into your face , im known by all my foes//
im like a fierce crack doze , bitch im an "ace" , ill turn you insane n watch how your brain blows.//

Watch me averse this kid's will , he thinks he's got lots of luck , thinkin ill be his first kill//
im like a curse youll get ill , this twink has just got fucked , better go pop a birth pill//

so what if the corniest scottish , in an attempt to flourish , filled with hype//
gets shown what a whore-he-is , while callin people "chuck norris" ,and blown like "bagpipes"?// (he's scottish , and he once called a guy chuck norris or somethin in a post)

so here's the end of this verse , i guess i earned enough respect , //
cuz next time if you dont rehearse , you're goin down like "the domino effect"//


Damn 10 bars gave me a headache. didnt go so good.

Multis-Domino
Personals-Sub
Creativity-Domino
Entertainment-Sub

Overall-Sub

it was really close but i enjoyed Subs more good battle tho

wow who the fuck is domino.. that had to be one of the worst multi attempts i've seen on the site so far,

multis:subsist
flow:subsist
punchlines:domino
creativity:domino
entertainment:subsist
vocabulary:domino
rhymes:subsist
metas/similies:domino
personals:subsist

overall:subsist

not too bad.. expected alot worse.. either way... subsist didn't win by much.. wat one textcee lacked the other had so it was pretty balanced.. two different types of styles

yep, entertaining battle for sure, haha

Flow: Subsist but not by that much
Multis: subsist
Creativity: Domino by a land slide
Punchlines: domino by a land slide
Personals: Subist
Vocab: Domino
Wordplay: domino by a land slide
Metas: domino

So in my eyes domino took most of the categories.

so it's 2-1 , any more votes?

we need 3 votes for subsist or 4 votes for domino to decide a winner

wow thats like , we'll never find a winner lol.

Multis - subsist
Flow - -subsist
Punchlines - domino
Entertainment - subsist
Personals - subsist


Overall subsist

Everythings not going to be a Ko, so its good practice. Lol

3-1 - Subsist

not sure if this is done or not but ill vote ne ways


i think dominos verse was decent...but it was draggged on....like some shit i woulda wrote like 2 years ago...some parts were pretty good but da rest to me was a big filler fest....but had some pretty coo punch lines...

Subsist had some good bars...alot better then ive seen before....rhyme scheme was pretty straight....(ill help u on dat too if ud like)



but yeah over all...i think both of u coulda been alot more direct wit things it seemed like it was kind of a verse written jst to write at some parts...soooo.... ima go wit subsist.....i jst didnt feel much from domino...maybe its jst me...but den again it is 4-1 now so dis is def closed...unless were goin to 5...

Nope. Just need one more vote