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Stayin active & just jokin

Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 2:17 pm
by NoVeL
- NoVeL

Re: Stayin active & just jokin

Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 2:37 pm
by eMCee Havic
shitty presence for real........... lyrics were al right but there was no emotion in your words.... its like Novel is a monotone rapper like gangstar.. lol.

kinda sucked for those reasons.. but has alot of room for improvement


peace

Re: Stayin active & just jokin

Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 3:17 pm
by MOEstradamus
i agree since it was a freestyle i wont say anything of little vocab and wat was on was played like the cardboard that was weak but its cool.... and yea man you need some emotion i felt like i was in a lecture when i was listen to it... you got some room for improvement