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I did some studying on numerology and wrote a rhyme on it , if you dont knwo what numerology is then peep this www.astrology-numerology.com , yall tru hip hop heads we gotta get are brains working elevate on rhymes and intellegence , ya feel me , this peice is real short i wrote it in like 4 or 5 minutes quality needs some mixing however nevertheless check it out let me know what u think

aye nice track dude very good shyt
when u gone get too me on msn

shits dope man... [email protected] hit me up if u ever wanna collab

- Mutual - wrote:aye nice track dude very good shyt
when u gone get too me on msn

didn't u get my email family i sent u two tracks and if u want you can play around with that Entrance Speech one

~Symbolikull~ wrote:shits dope man... [email protected] hit me up if u ever wanna collab

i got something for ya family let me know if yuo down for it

im always workin on somethin homie!!! im always down

well shit in that case i got this one joint and it needs a verse added to it...im sure your mixing capabilities is better than mine right now so if u wanna play around with it a little bit then that's fine... the song is called "robotic eyes" i'll send the songs to ya email so u can check it out and kinda get a feel on what im vibe'n on

i think this is lyrically dope tru talk ..
ya deliv needs a lil work though..you got a wild
scheme style so da flow needs a lil work in da verse..
the hook is delivered cleaner and scheme is pretty much on..

good shit IMO.you already know about the mixxing issues so
keep doin ya thing homey..1

TreTru wrote:i think this is lyrically dope tru talk ..
ya deliv needs a lil work though..you got a wild
scheme style so da flow needs a lil work in da verse..
the hook is delivered cleaner and scheme is pretty much on..

good shit IMO.you already know about the mixxing issues so
keep doin ya thing homey..1

thanx for the feed man and yea i knew it was gonna come out pretty amatuerish considering i wrote in 5 miinutes and recorded it two minutes later...but nevertheless i appreciate the feedback greatly

i did not get ya e-mails know but i will check again now

i need broadband man... gud drop yo. I dig the lyrics and the beat. just the recording at fault. I heard the flow dropped and picked up again somewhere towards the end of the first verse, but gud shit nun the less.

awaiting the next chapter,peace.

the old school flow thats what you got..but u need to keep it more on beat on certain parts..other than that u need to up the quality that would make it even doper..

keep at it.

thanx for the feeed