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i guess yall do house rules idk i really don't txt battle
but uh 10-12 lines
5 votes to win
3-ko
something like that

check in..i'll drop my verse shortly...

-- Tue Jun 23, 2009 11:49 pm --

Tella's the name, dont mistaken it for TiVo
ya raps sucks, but i wonder if they deep throat
plus peeps know i flow "nice", ur belligerent
call me jet lag, i'll lay u down "plane" n simple kid
beat'n this kid like masturbation...it cums quick
call him brain fart, he's obviously a dumb shit
now u cop'd a attitude, cuz "quix" wouldn't battle u
half as ill as cattle flu, longing for my lattitude??
merc'd the "alphabet" now he thinks he's a K KiLLaH?
ha, laid out in the grass and asked "if u okay Killa"
truth be told i would even bother to read ya shit
so why you swing'n on my balls kid...i ain't even pitch???

Nice verse..

But..

Doper than piff? pshh prick i'll leave ya opium hit/
Cuz yousa bitch you'll get whipped like TOKYO DRIFT/
TELLA-who? TELLA-cop cuz we know ur a snitch/
So ima "trap" like fuck rats n split this rodent in 5ths/
Ya flows dick, ya played out like a rerun tellavised/
You wouldn't "air hott" if ya nickname was helluh fly/
I'll Swell this guy watch ima make em "lose face"/
Ta brush his teeth hell have ta enter his ass with toothpaste/
You're a gay ass snitch you prolly fucked a few jakes/
While im fightin my new case ur suckin ur new mate/
I'll ingite ya with rude hate ashing cigz in ur eyes/
Till ya blind but you still can TELL A VISION is fried/

Tella:

Tella's the name, dont mistaken it for TiVo
ya raps sucks, but i wonder if they deep throat
-NICE OPENER
plus peeps know i flow "nice", ur belligerent
call me jet lag, i'll lay u down "plane" n simple kid
-OK
beat'n this kid like masturbation...it cums quick
call him brain fart, he's obviously a dumb shit
-NA
now u cop'd a attitude, cuz "quix" wouldn't battle u
half as ill as cattle flu, longing for my lattitude??-
OK WORDPLAY BUT THATS ABOUT IT
merc'd the "alphabet" now he thinks he's a K KiLLaH?
ha, laid out in the grass and asked "if u okay Killa"
-NA
truth be told i would even bother to read ya shit
so why you swing'n on my balls kid...i ain't even pitch
-WEAK CLOSER

kILLAH:

Doper than piff? pshh prick i'll leave ya opium hit/
Cuz yousa bitch you'll get whipped like TOKYO DRIFT/
-OK OPENER
TELLA-who? TELLA-cop cuz we know ur a snitch/
So ima "trap" like fuck rats n split this rodent in 5ths/
-NICE
Ya flows dick, ya played out like a rerun tellavised/
You wouldn't "air hott" if ya nickname was helluh fly/
-NICE
I'll Swell this guy watch ima make em "lose face"/
Ta brush his teeth hell have ta enter his ass with toothpaste/
-OK
You're a gay ass snitch you prolly fucked a few jakes/
While im fightin my new case ur suckin ur new mate/
-NA
I'll ingite ya with rude hate ashing cigz in ur eyes/
Till ya blind but you still can TELL A VISION is fried/
-OK CLOSER


Punches-Killah
multi's-tie
personal-Killah
creativity-tie
flow-tie
nameplay-tie

V/K Killah

Nice Battle i enjoyed this one......

Punches-Killah is were harder and more of them
multi's-Killah he had more complex ones and more of them
personal-niether really had personals but i guess dey don't know anything about each other
creativity-Killah had this one but barely
flow-Killahs i felt i could read easier and smoother
nameplay-Killah had this one wrapped up tellavision tried but was weak

vote Killah

he dropped a solid verse

Tellavision i think your verse was hot it just went against a better verse if you woulda spit the same thing against a different person you may have won

Tella, you had a pretty nice verse..
flow was on point all tha way
*the TIVO / Deep Throat was a good start..
*jet lag / plane n simple line was aight
*any 'masturbation' tends to sound played to me
anyway, overall nice

Killah, i thought you had a very consistant verse...
You wouldn't "air hott" if ya nickname was helluh fly/
i liked that line a lot..
closed really good..

line for line pretty even ..

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Killah

3-0 killah some one close this

3-0
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